Mine (haiku) #writephoto

 

I witness the sun
in the dying afternoon
when you call me “mine”

 

dance
My first entry for Sue’s #writephoto

https://scvincent.com/2020/05/14/thursday-photo-prompt-dance-writephoto/

 

47 Comments

    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sue..i am glad you like it.😊

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      1. Sue Vincent says:

        Thanks for joining in this week πŸ™‚

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  1. alwayswithlovekat says:

    Aww 😍

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    1. michnavs says:

      😊😊😊

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  2. Nathi says:

    Interesting!

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  3. Wonderful haiku, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Punam😚😚😚

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      1. πŸ€—πŸ˜š

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  4. Sadje says:

    Succinct!

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    1. michnavs says:

      πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜‡thanks Sadje

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      1. Sadje says:

        A pleasure

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  5. utahan15 says:

    sun shade
    and rain
    post meridian

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    1. michnavs says:

      😊😊😊thank you

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  6. yassy says:

    Great haiku.

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    1. michnavs says:

      πŸ’“thanks Yassy

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      1. yassy says:

        My pleasure πŸ€—πŸ‘

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  7. Your haiku is a perfect companion to the photo!
    It is beautiful, deep, heart-touching…has dual meaning to me…etc. πŸ™‚ A ponderful wonderful read!
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Carolyn…yes it could be interpreted in different ways.
      πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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  8. murisopsis says:

    I like this one!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Val😊😊😊

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  9. calmkate says:

    so sweet πŸ˜‰

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    1. michnavs says:

      A midnight write kate.. thanksπŸ˜‰

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      1. calmkate says:

        you did well … I’m fast asleep by that time!

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  10. Create Space says:

    Soulful Mich! X

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Marie..

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  11. SnowHearT says:

    Napakahusay po talaga ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  12. judeitakali says:

    Ooh this is beautifulπŸŒΌπŸ’›

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Jude❀

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      1. judeitakali says:

        My pleasure

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  13. unsaid words says:

    how beautiful! Mich ❀❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you.πŸ˜‰

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank youπŸ˜™

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  14. faustinayick says:

    Wow, I loved the phrase “dying afternoon”, it hit me emotionally! Lovely poem, Mich πŸ’œπŸ’œ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you dear…😚😚😚 keep safe as your school is about to open.πŸ™‡

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      1. faustinayick says:

        Thank you so much!! Kind of nervous πŸ˜‚but I’ll be okay!

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  15. This is lovely, Mich. ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Di

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  16. neha98blog says:

    Trivial words put in a symmetric way can do real wonders. Good job, dear.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much❀

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      1. neha98blog says:

        It’s a pleasure, dear.

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  17. Beautiful ❀️

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