Rain

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rain falls gently
like my own poetry
each drop, a syllable
a sweet verse of love

each one is a melody
of songs of thoughts
of dreams of ever after
and of love comforting

dead air silence
last drop of rain
a fading memory
of a distant promise

just memories
of many summers ago
then all is still
summer is still

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  1. Kritika says:

    ‘each drop, a syllable’ beautiful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thanl you dear…❤❤

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  2. Nathi says:

    Exquisite! And love this❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aww thank yoy Nathi💓💓

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      1. Nathi says:

        My pleasure 😇

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      2. michnavs says:

        🌻🌻🌻

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  3. calmkate says:

    a very gentle melodic one, lovely Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much kate💗💗💗

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      1. calmkate says:

        so enjoyable to read!

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      2. michnavs says:

        I am so glad you find it enjoyable as i was indeed enjoying writing it🌻🌻🌻

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  4. So soothing and lyrical like the gentle rain! Lovely, Mich. ❤️😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhhh thank you Punam..
      A little something to ease our feelings this pandemic❤

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      1. It’s gorgeous dear. ❤️

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      2. michnavs says:

        🤗🤗🤗thank you again Punam

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  5. yassy says:

    Beautifully worded verse.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay…thank you Yassy❤

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      1. yassy says:

        Welcome ❤️

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  6. Miriam says:

    This is beautiful Mich. Soft and soothing. 💕

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Mirriam…😇😇😇

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  7. utahan15 says:

    little lithe
    water
    for arid daughter

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    1. michnavs says:

      💓💓💓

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      1. utahan15 says:

        sweetness . love your stuff. keep it up kudos~

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you so much..❤

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  8. elegantly written. Simple and profound in meaning

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you so much😊😊😊

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  9. Sadje says:

    Beautiful poem Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks sadje😚

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      1. Sadje says:

        Always a pleasure

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you😊

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  10. Beautiful poem on Rain, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you kamal😊

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      1. Welcome Mich❤️❤️❤️

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  11. as always beautiful soul words in your poems. Rain drops make us think and put a beat into our life.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Nanette for your kind words always..😚

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  12. mrswrangler says:

    A very nice poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so kindly😙

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  13. unsaid words says:

    This is so beautifully crafted, Mich,
    simple yet profound
    like those raindrops
    soothing heart
    and so beautifully have you described your poetry in the form of rain.
    This is gorgeous Mich ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you so much for your kind comments..❤❤❤

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  14. Mandibelle16 says:

    Love this. “Summer is still.”

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Mandy😊😊

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      1. Mandibelle16 says:

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  15. Oh, such a beautiful poem, SweetMich! Peaceful, rhythmic, soulful…like a gentle rain. (I have joy-tears in my eyes! SIGH and deep breath taken. 🙂 Thank you! )
    (((HUGS))) ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww😊😊😊thank you so much Carolyn..always..

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  16. SnowHearT says:

    Sa bawat linya ay parang ulan na dumidilig sa uhaw na puso.

    💗💗💗

    At umuulan na po dito…kaysarap pagmasdan at pakinggan animo’y mga batong kristal sa ganda.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh wow your very good …ang galing ng tagalog mo..❤❤❤

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      1. SnowHearT says:

        Eh,,,,salamat po …pero mas maganda po talaga po ang lines ng mga tula niyo po.

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  17. Rupali says:

    Beautiful poem, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Rupali

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  18. markmkane says:

    Your words ring so true!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Mark

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  19. iidorun says:

    How this gentle rhythm was so needed today. It was hot and humid so rain would have been so welcome. Your words are almost like a contemplation. Wonderful!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh thank you Irma ..i am so happy to know that🤗🤗🤗

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