oblivious of the time
and around
I longed for your
hold so tight
your hold that keeps my steady
gaze in place
your hold that once made a
better me
incognizant of how I felt
wanting how much of you
I can take
I never imagined it would be
this dark without you
the darkness that seemed to
topple down my soul
the darkness I once ignored
for you are there
holding closely as I fear
It seems just a while
but no, it’s been a long while
a long while
since you walked away
unnoticed
it numbed my mind
froze my heart
I can’t take you out of
my life
I need to touch you again
I need to hold you close in
my arms
I miss you that’s what
I wanna say
I love you, I want you
to stay
It’s been ten years dad
ten years and I am mad
‘cos I can’t have you back
You will be 70 years old today dad, i hope your having a birthday blast in heaven. β€β€β€
This one got me – all the feels and misty eyed too.
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Thank you Valππ
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a most loving tribute to the man you love most whose premature departure caused you the deepest pain .. take care precious!
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Thank you kateβ€β€β€
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This is such a touching poem.
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Thanks Sadjeπ
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A pleasure Mich
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A beautiful, powerful, poignant poem, SweetMich! It brings tears to my eyes.
All of us who have lost a beloved one can relate.
That photo conveys the emotion in your poem. Beautiful duo…photo and poem.
I, too, hope your Dad is having a birthday blast in heaven! π
I really think he would want you to take comfort in the loving memories and enjoy his birthday. π
(((HUGS))) β€ π
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Thank you Carolyn…he wil always be remembered by us as the sweet and loving father.πππ
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happy birthday Mich Papa, love and peace upon your soul, with a loving Father in Heaven waiting at heaven’s door for his beloved children, one day eternity will join our families together again, knitted with the longing you expressed so deeply and intensely here. Your words have a deep effect on me too Mich just like all your readers we honour this special day for your dad. I too felt time torn away form me and the darkness has never been this heavy. You have my love and blessings today and everyday dear friend.
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Thank you Gina for your kind words…i am blessed to have people like you around. I think no amount of time could make us forget the people we love the most.πππ
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This poem hit a spot with me. I went to my dad’s grave today to put flowers out.
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Ohhhhβ€β€β€we remember them always…i cannot visit him today as i am oceans away from home ..
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Yes we do. I am sorry you can’t visit easy.
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A beautiful tribute indeed. Touched me.
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π€π€thank you so much
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A touching tribute to your late father – taken too soon from earth at age 60! I am sure he is having a blast in Heaven and having tons of friends, looking over you too. It is great when you have had such a strong daughter and father relationship. Blessings and chin up as he still loves up, from up above π
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Thank you GH ..thanks so much…π€π€π€
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I cannot say it is ” my pleasure” on a sombre topic but you deserve the kindness. π₯°π
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β€β€β€ thank you GH from the bottom of my heart
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A wonderful tribute to your dad, Mich. Really beautiful poem. Great πππππ
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Thanks dear Kamal..π€ππ€
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Welcome Mich ππ
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This is beautiful tribute Mich.
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Thank you Rupaliπππ
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Such a beautiful, moving verse, Mich. It brought tears to my eyes. β€οΈ
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Thank you Punamππ
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You are welcome dear. β€οΈ
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iyak π’π’π’ kainis po si Maβam nagpapaiyak eh..π€£π€£π€£
kailanmaβy di natin makakalimutan
ang mga mahal natin sa buhay
mananatiling nakaukit sa ating mga puso
HABAMBUHAY!!!!
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Awwwwπ€π€π€sorry to make you cry dear…i too am crying..
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Wala namang makakarinig nang pagtangis.
Tahimik at banayad na umaagos ang mga luha.
Sa paraang ito, naiibsan ang sakit at pangungulilang dulot.
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Touching. Your words brought me to tears. Hugs.
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Ohπ€π€π€thank you…let me wipe those tearsπ€
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So moving Mich
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πππthank you
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Eighteen years, for me. And I still miss my father… very much. But that speaks of a blessing, that one should ever have known a parent who would embody such love.
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Ohhh,….i understand how you feel..and i am sure your dad is happily watching over you right now .π
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