(Bali, 2019)
without you is like
a stolen moonlight at night
in total darkness
without you is like
an invisible big wave
in complete stillness
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Michelle Ayon Navajas is an international best-selling poet. Her 5th poetry book, "I Will Love You Forever, Too" went straight to the number ONE spot in Amazon and Kobo.Com on its first day of release in less than 24 hours. She also authored the poetry books "After Rain Skies", "What If Snowflakes Don't Fall In Winter?", "Oh! Dear One" and "I Would Fly To Where You Are". She is a published author at Spillwords NYC, a three-time "Publication of the Month" nominee. Her poetry appeared in several international literary magazines and anthologies.
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Life can seem shrouded without certain people leaving us in a darkness seeking their light.
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Beautiful thought Nanette 😊😊😊thank you
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Without you, Mich…something is definitely amiss. Beautiful emotions crafted with the ease of a pen dipped in the moonless ocean.
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Oh wow….moonless ocean that’s beautiful Anita..
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Wonderful portrayal of emotions
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Thank you Sadje😊
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You’re welcome 😇
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Aww! That incompleteness so beautifully conveyed, Mich. ❤️
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Oh, thank you Punam❤❤❤
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Welcome dear. 😊❤️
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all
in
sand of time
rhyme
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😊😊😊thanks
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stunning shot to accompany your words of aloneness …
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Thank you Kate❤❤❤
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Love the juxtaposition of motion and stillness!
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Aww thank you ❤❤❤
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Powerful and inventive simile Mich…”like
a stolen moonlight at night”
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Thank you Marie😚😚
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This is awesome. Touching the soul.
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Aww thank you so much❤❤❤
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Wow….I think this is one of my favourite ones from you! I love how you’re able to put so many emotions into just, well, 5-7-5 syllables! Amazing, mich!! 💕💕 🙂
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Thank you so much..i am pleased you like this ❤❤❤
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I really did!! :))
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❤❤❤
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Aw. 😦
Perfect poem and photo duet, SweetMich. And I can feel the emotion in your words describing that dark-and-still-feeling of missing the one(s) we love. Sometimes we are apart so long from them we feel like they really have been stolen, they really are invisible…but then if we are able to be with them again, the celebration is magnificent! 🙂
(((HUGS)))
😷 🙂 😷
PS…was this in honor of your Dad? Your girls? Your dearheart?
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Thank you Carolyn. The pandemic separated us all…and its been months since i last saw my girls and its really making me crazy..😅😅😅 but still hoping for the best and that boarders will open soon..❤❤❤
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I hope so, too! For you! And for them!
🙂
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Thank you ❤❤❤
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So much said in so few words. Beautiful! Great photo too!
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Thank you ❤❤
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😊💜
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Woah, that’s a great photo and the haiku are so exceptional 💛🌹
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I am so delighted by what you said ..thank you🤗
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The combination of the photo and the haikus are stunning…there’s an incompleteness in the poems that make you envision the scene continuing even as the poem ends.
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Thank you so much for adding your thoughts here Jade…😚🤗🤗🤗
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wonderful haikus.
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Thank you😊😊
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Such beautiful expression of emotions with few words loved it Mich.
What a beautiful picture, is that you?
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Hi ….thank you so much…that is my second daughter..i have a few posts with my pictures in it..
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aww so pretty she is 💞
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😊😊😊
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