My Dear Summer, Rain and Goodbye #whatdoyousee

Oh, my dear summer
and rain
and goodbye
why did you conspire
to break my heart
altogether at once
why do I have to remember
you both, as
the happiest
and the saddest
memory
like a photograph
capturing
every smile
not knowing
the loneliness
behind
the gloomy feeling
after each radiant
and charming smile
my dearest summer, rain
and goodbye please cease
to connive and stop breaking my heart
altogether, at once

 

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(For a visually challenged reader, the image shows a camera capturing the image of a woman in color, while the rest of the image is in black and white. There are lots of tools on the wall behind the camera)

https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2020/06/29/what-do-you-see-36-29-june-2020/

59 Comments

  1. kittysverses says:

    Wow, you’ve expressed your thoughts beautifully, Mich. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      aw, thank you so much Kitty.. have a wonderful week

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Mich. Wishing you a wonderful week ahead, thank you for your wishes. πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  2. A beautiful take on the prompt πŸ˜ƒ

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    1. michnavs says:

      aaww,, thank you as always Shweta

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  3. Rupali says:

    Wonderful, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Rupali… enjoy the rest of the week

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      1. Rupali says:

        Thanks and you as well.

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      2. The dichotomous nature of life! Mich, this is wonderfully expressed. ❀️

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      3. michnavs says:

        Thank you dear Punam… i agree

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      4. You are welcome, dear.

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  4. Kritika says:

    It is heartbreaking. The conspiring weather play.
    You are awesome with words.

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    1. michnavs says:

      aw, my heart melting.. thank you so much Kritika..

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      1. Kritika says:

        My pleasure always πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  5. Such a unique take on the prompt Mich. Wonderful πŸ‘πŸ»

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    1. michnavs says:

      oh,so glad you thought so Radhika

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you dear..

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  6. Garfield Hug says:

    Great poem! You always give out heartfelt poemsπŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ’β€

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww thank you GHπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      1. Garfield Hug says:

        πŸ’πŸ₯°πŸ’•

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  7. Sadje says:

    Such a evocative poem! Mich I love this poem.
    Thanks a lot for joining in the challenge.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks too Sadje…πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

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      1. Sadje says:

        My pleasure

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  8. Sadje says:

    Reblogged this on Keep it alive and commented:
    First in this week;
    A lovely poem from Michnavs;
    Enjoy

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sadje

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome πŸ˜‡

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  9. calmkate says:

    you sure have talent!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww my heart is melting..πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“ thanks Kate.

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      1. calmkate says:

        most impressive that you made the top ten with your covid poem πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you kate..i am so happyπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      3. calmkate says:

        good to be glad πŸ™‚

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      4. michnavs says:

        It is kate😊😊😊

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  10. -Eugenia says:

    Beautifully penned, Mich! 🌻 🌞

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks EugiπŸ˜„

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        You’re welcome! πŸ˜‰

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  11. murisopsis says:

    Rain and summer seem to go together for me – and to dance in the rain is a joy. But I can see how that is not the case for everyone. We do often have the world washed of color making our view very dreary but I feel it is our own interpretation that colors the experience. A lovely poem! You did capture the connection of summer, rain and farewells.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Val for sharing your wonderful experience. It added layer to my poem..
      I am always joyful to see you here with your lovely thoughts

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  12. A beautiful and melancholy poem, Mich. Well done.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Hello Di, thank youπŸ₯°

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  13. You’ve captured our feelings so beautifully and with your whole heart, SweetMich!
    Yes, I am always sad to say ‘goodbye’ to summer and the rains. But, I look forward to their return, when I can say ‘hello, yay, you are back’! πŸ™‚
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay..always delighted to see your sweet comment Carolyn..
      Thank you so muchπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  14. mrswrangler says:

    Very nice. Have a good week.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you.πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  15. judeitakali says:

    Woah this is spectacular Michelle, I love love this 🌸🌼

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Jude..

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      1. judeitakali says:

        Very much my pleasure Michelle

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  16. Jules says:

    Reminds me of a teenager longing for more summer days πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you JulesπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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  17. iidorun says:

    Love the conflict in your words – happiest/saddest, break/altogether, gloomy/radiant. It definitely captures the conflict of relationships – the person you love to hate or the person you hate to love.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ahhhh Irma you knew fully well what this poem really means…thank you..❀❀❀

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  18. Lovely poem, Mich but who would not enjoy rain that comes after a hot summer and cools the earth.

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    1. michnavs says:

      I agree Kamal…thank you..😊😊😊

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