It’s A Thin Line, My Dear #dream#writephoto#mighty

how mighty it is my dear that I dream of you in my deepest sleep at night as my knight in shining armor and yet in my waking time you are but a wretch rascal how mighty it is, even more, my dear that you are my r

how mighty
it is my dear
that I dream of you
in my deepest
sleep at night
as my knight
in shining armor
and yet in my waking time
you are but a wretch rascal
how mighty it is, even more, my dear
that you are my rainbow after my rain
yet in my darkest night, you are
my eclipse casting a shadow
upon my world
how mighty
it is oh dear,
that you are the one
I hate to love
and the one
I love to hate

the road indeed
is narrow
as it’s a thin line
between love and hate

 

dream

 

Thank you to Irma of https://iidorun.wordpress.com for this “the person you love to hate or the person you hate to love.” a comment she left in my previous post My Dear Summer, Rain and Goodbye https://michnavs.wordpress.com/2020/06/29/my-dear-summer-rain-and-goodbye-whatdoyousee/

Linking to Eugi’s weekly prompt: mighty

https://amanpan.com/2020/06/29/eugis-weekly-prompt-mighty-june-29-2020/

Sue’sΒ  dream – writephoto prompt https://scvincent.com/2020/07/02/thursday-photo-prompt-dream-writephoto/

93 Comments

  1. Outstanding Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you so much…..

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  2. ivor20 says:

    Dear Irma has indeed inspired you to produce compassion love poem…. I found this gorgeous music/video today, and I found the video clip very moving….

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Ivor for sharing that video as always, you share the most memorable videos and songs.

      and yes Irma’s comment was so beautiful (poetically) that i have to do something about it.

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      1. ivor20 says:

        Oh… Isn’t that one of of lovely things about being on WP, within this this wonderful group of poets/writers, and how we seem to spur/inspire each other on..

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      2. michnavs says:

        I agree Ivor. this is a space filled with wonderful people and brilliant poets that really encourage one another..

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  3. I know that feeling

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yeah… i suppose we all get this feeling..

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  4. Kritika says:

    ‘yet in my darkest night, you are
    my eclipse casting a shadow’
    Beautiful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thanks KritikaπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      1. Kritika says:

        My pleasure Mich πŸ™‚

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  5. Yes a beautiful poem and true words Michnavs 😊❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you SuzetteπŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  6. Beck says:

    ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

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  7. Deep poem the different views we have of a person, the Light side in our dreams of who they really are or who we wish them to be. The dark-side the times we are in disagreement with them or is it the truth of who they really are not an illusion. Fine Line between Love and Hate. We always turn to love rather than hate but sometimes the hateful feelings are the truth of who they are.

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    1. michnavs says:

      “hateful feelings are the truth of who they are.”….i agree with this Nanette, the hateful things about them are sometimes the manifestations of who they really are…and then its up to us to whether choose to love them still or not.

      Thank you so much always for your profound thoughts shared here…i love it, as i am seeing the different layers of the ideas and opinions which are really helpful.

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      1. Dealing with hateful feelings not so easy.

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      2. michnavs says:

        So true Nanette❀

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  8. Sadje says:

    Spot on Mich. There are people like that in our lives. Can’t live with them and can’t live without them!

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am smiling Sadje cos you put words into what i really am thinking..thank you so much for that…and always

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      1. Sadje says:

        Always a pleasure Mich.

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      2. michnavs says:

        πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      3. Sadje says:

        πŸ™πŸ˜

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  9. calmkate says:

    lovely creation, and the sheer joy in Ivors video added another depth πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kate..yeah i agree with you on Ivor’s video..he always shares memorable videos..

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      1. calmkate says:

        but you sure nailed that poem, thanks!

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      2. michnavs says:

        Awww, thank you so much kateπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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  10. mrswrangler says:

    Very lovely. Have a good weekend.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you..happy weekend too

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome. We are almost to the lake.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Oh wow that is so wonderful..enjoy

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  11. Frank Hubeny says:

    Good observation about the thin line between love and hate.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Frank..☺

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  12. I hope the feelings a poet pens down…reaches someone in needy crown….

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhh nice verse…thank you

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  13. A sure thin line between love and hate and you have composed this poem so beautifully, Mich. Every stanza was mystical.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Kamal happy week end to youπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      1. Welcome 😊😊😊😊 Mich same to you too.

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  14. -Eugenia says:

    What a lovely expression of emotions, Mich! A mighty lovely poem and thank you for joining in.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you too Eugenia ..πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  15. Lisa Thomson says:

    You’ve really captured on a common theme but not often discussed. The love-hate feeling we have for some…Nice poem, Michelle. nice to come and visit your site.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Lisa..i am glad you like it..πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  16. Rhen Laird says:

    What a great response to the photo!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..❀❀

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      1. Rhen Laird says:

        You’re very welcome, dear heart ❀

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  17. Excellent, Mich! You’ve expressed so well something we’ve all encountered. We’ve all had someone(or maybe more than one someone) that fits this that came into our lives. πŸ™‚
    (((HUGS))) ❀
    PS…makes me think of the lyrics from a Queen song…
    "I can't live with you, but I can't live without you
    I can't breathe if you stay, but I can't bear you to go away…."
    Queen, "I Can't Live With You"

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Carolyn..and i agree we all have in a one way or the other experience this.

      Keep safe and be well always

      Wow thank you for that Queen song…πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

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  18. A melee of mixed emotions that got me thinking about my past. Absolutely brilliant.

    My story!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, so glad it gave you some moment of recollection…

      Thank you so much for dropping by.πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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  19. Sue Vincent says:

    Brilliant, Michelle…that line can be thin indeed…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sue..πŸ’ž

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Chuck

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  20. Indira says:

    Excellent. It’s a thin line. Is it with someone we are obsessed with?

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    1. michnavs says:

      It doesnt have to be with someone you are obsessee with. It could be your friend, a relative; these are the potential people who can also trigger that kind of feeling from you.

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      1. Indira says:

        Still, too much expectation from any relationship may cause it. My opinion, not to hurt anyone.

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  21. Akhila says:

    A beautiful thin line continues to connect love and hate..so well narrated

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw thank you Akhila…so nice to see you here..

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  22. It’s a thin line indeed. I know the feeling. Beautifully written, Mich πŸ˜ƒ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank yoy Shweta for dropping by always.πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ with your lovely comments

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      1. My pleasure πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks EugiπŸ₯°

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  23. Susi Bocks says:

    NAILED IT!!! πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thanks SusiπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ˜™

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      1. Susi Bocks says:

        You’re welcome! ❀

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  24. kittysverses says:

    This is a lovely combination of prompts, Mich. Beautiful poetry. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you kitty

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Mich. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sue..

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  25. HappySoul says:

    Wow ! Beautiful poem !

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank youπŸ˜‡

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  26. willowdot21 says:

    This is truly brilliant πŸ’œ.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much

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      1. willowdot21 says:

        It’s a great poem πŸ’œ

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  27. Ruby Manchanda says:

    The writing flows effortlessly through all the prompts.

    Welfare unto all
    Rab rakha

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much

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  28. Chris Hall says:

    What a wonderful poem this is, Mich! It brings back deep and rather uncomfortable memories; to stir something so deep is very powerful.

    Like a few other folk I was also remembering a song as I read your poem, and then the last two lines came up: ‘It’s a thin line between love and hate.’ I was thinking of the version by The Pretenders rather than that by Annie Lennox. Can I add to your playlist? It’s one of my very favourite songs: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4pCCdclkdLY

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you Chris .will listen to that song and add in my playlist .thank you

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  29. Susi Bocks says:

    Reblogged this on I Write Her and commented:
    I can totally relate to this piece! The greatest of loves certainly do take you to the wildest extremes. Thanks, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Susi😊😊

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      1. Susi Bocks says:

        You’re welcome, Mich! Thank YOU! πŸ™‚

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  30. This is fantastic, and so relatable

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much😊

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