Love Dance #whatdoyousee

how do you tell time,

in seconds, in minutes, in hours?

for when you move, it is of no essence

you can speed up and slow down

and in between, time stops

my breathing stops

I watch you in awe, in admiration

time stops.

 

I fall in love.

 

how do you move through space,

in specific lines, and specific space?

I can barely follow-through

as your body motions in perfection

I watch you in awe, in admiration

time stops.

 

I fall in love.

 

how do you exhibit force

in smooth and sharp movements

for you are strong even in

lightweight stepsΒ 

you tiptoed still, in precision

I watch you in awe, in admiration

time stops.

 

I fall in love.

with you.

over and over

in time, in space, and in full force

I love you

as I love you move your body

in harmony

with time, with space and with force.

 

For Sadje’s What Do You See?

dance

 

https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2020/08/24/what-do-you-see-45-31-august-2020/

88 Comments

  1. Lia says:

    How very beautiful Michelle πŸ™πŸŒ·πŸ’—

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Lia.. how are you?

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      1. Lia says:

        It’s been a pretty busy time, with a long journey, but I feel well enough, and healthy. :)) And you?

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      2. michnavs says:

        back in my home country too.. keep safe Lia and Bless you and your family..

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      3. Lia says:

        Oh wow! That’s good news then. Same to you Michelle. Keep well.

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  2. I read in awe, I watch in admiration …how you write flawlessly about love!!!

    Mich!!! Love this!!!β€οΈπŸ˜˜πŸ€—

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    1. michnavs says:

      yeeyyy.. my heart skip a beat with your comment Punam.. thank you…

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      1. πŸ˜Šβ€οΈπŸ€—

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  3. This is me whenever I watched MJ danced. I wondered how he defied gravity, space, and time. Anyways, thank you for bringing a smile to my face this morning.

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    1. michnavs says:

      awww,,, i am so happy to have made you smile..good morning to you but its goodnight for me here..

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  4. Beck says:

    This is beautiful Mich! ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      hi Beck, thank you..

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  5. Sadje says:

    It was worth the wait. This is a wonderful poem Mich. thanks a lot for joining in the challenge

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you Sadje, … i am back in my home country and boy, oh boy our internet signal here is so frustrating.

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome! I know nowadays there is lot of load on internet these days.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Indeed especially from here..

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      3. Sadje says:

        I think in most places. What with homeschooling, work from home and entertainment, it is slow in most places

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      4. michnavs says:

        Yes Sadje and its worst here..

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      5. Sadje says:

        Must be so frustrating.

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      6. michnavs says:

        It is Sadje…

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  6. Kritika says:

    Adore the beauty of the love flowing in a dance through words. You are amazing in writing love. (Heart)

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    1. michnavs says:

      my heart is grateful for what you said kritika… thank you so much

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      1. Kritika says:

        My pleasure πŸ™‚
        You fill the heart with imagination. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts.

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      2. michnavs says:

        😍😍😍

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  7. yassy says:

    Beautifully fluid lines.

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    1. michnavs says:

      aw, thank you Yassy… so much

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      1. yassy says:

        So welcome πŸ™πŸΌ

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  8. Veena says:

    A very beautiful composition loved it .

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  9. utahan15 says:

    time is both
    either
    neither
    friend nor foe~

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    1. michnavs says:

      😍😍

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  10. Very beautiful poem! Well done!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you and welcome on board..πŸ™‚

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  11. HappySoul says:

    Beautifully penned Mich 😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  12. This is just lovely and flows like the dance it speaks of.. Thank you Mich… Hope all is well my friend.. πŸ™‚ Sending love your way… ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sue…everything is fine here..as i keep on praying for the world to heal

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      1. Likewise Much, good to know you’re okay. πŸ’–πŸ™

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  13. The Eclectic Contrarian says:

    Just seems like time stands still when she dances.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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      1. The Eclectic Contrarian says:

        You’re welcome!

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  14. Nathi says:

    Damn! So beautifully penned, Michβœ¨πŸ’œ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww thanks Nathi..😍😍😍

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      1. Nathi says:

        It’s my pleasure πŸ˜‡ and have a great day!!

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  15. calmkate says:

    yes you write flawlessly and fluidly about love and motion …

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you kate so much..😍😍😍

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sadje..

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  16. This is beautiful. I think it pairs nicely with this image.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..😍😍

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you 😍😍

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  17. mrswrangler says:

    The opening paragraph captures my attention.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…😍😍😍

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  18. Garfield Hug says:

    Good job! Are you still in mandatory stay in ? Or free to be out?

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    1. michnavs says:

      My 14 days mandatory quarantine is now over..but i am still staying indoors.

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      1. Garfield Hug says:

        Smart lass….enjoy family time and I suppose along the beach or where you have less populated people, you could venture out and have some nature walks. Have an enjoyable stay!

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks GH…keep safe in thereπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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  19. Chris Hall says:

    Beautifully written, Mich. I can really feel the rhythm of the dance πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Chris..

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  20. Chiru says:

    That’s beautiful

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you and welcome on board

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  21. Your words captured me in…and by the end of your poem, my heart was dancing. This is so beautiful and so relatable, SweetMich!!! πŸ™‚ Dance helps us express what our mind, body, heart, and soul are experiencing! And dance is a beautiful analogy to love, too. πŸ™‚
    HUGS!!! ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am always delighted to know that you love my poetry Carolyn….it feels so good too…and as always grateful of your lovely comments..

      Thank youπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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  22. -Eugenia says:

    A joyous piece, Mich! Full of positive vibes. ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      thanks Eugenia..

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much…😍

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  23. judeitakali says:

    Gorgeously done 🧑🌸

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you .😍😍😍

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      1. judeitakali says:

        Anytime πŸ§‘πŸ’•

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  24. Dakshali Gupta says:

    Beautiful !!πŸ’™

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      1. Dakshali Gupta says:

        ☺️

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  25. Jules says:

    A simple movement by those we love becomes a lover’s dance.
    Enchanting words. πŸ˜€

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Jules…πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

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  26. bejamin4 says:

    This is something perfect!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you😊😊😊

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  27. Peakspeak says:

    Magnificent appreciation…. ❀❀

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  28. ErICO ErIco erICO says:

    Speechless…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Wow, thank you.

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