Dark Clouds #whatdoyousee

 

with a heart so heavy,

miserable, unhappy

weighed down with grief and sadness

and with a smile so bleak

full of sorrow

gloomy and somber

from a faraway distance

here is wishing you that we are both 

looking at the same dark clouds

in a brighter way

from a different perspective

and different point of view

because even the darkest of clouds

could clear at any minute

and reveal a hundred colored

weightless magically maneuvered

paper bag clouds, drifting under the sun

dancing through the wind

taking flight,

rising above life 

 

with a heart, so heavy here is wishing you that we are both

looking at the same dark clouds

tonight

 

hot air ballon

for Sadje’s

https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2020/08/31/what-do-you-see-44-24-august-2020/

66 Comments

  1. calmkate says:

    I hear you sadness in those dark clouds … but soon the colours shall brighten your day!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes kate..soon..thank you always..

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      1. calmkate says:

        love and hugs ❤

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      2. michnavs says:

        🤗🤗🤗

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  2. Sadje says:

    Catching glimpses of beauty and joy through dark clouds. A beautiful poem Mich. thanks for joining in the challenge

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you too Sadje..i think i would be late (than my usual) for a while..

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome! Don’t stress yourself out. I hope your internet problems get sorted out soon

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  3. Garfield Hug says:

    Stay chipper my friend. I hope you feel happier soon.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks GH…its becoming frustrating..😔

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      1. Garfield Hug says:

        Oh dear! Don’t let it frustrate you. Change what you can, do what you can. This is my simple philosophy. Garfield hugs! Thinking of you.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you so much GH…and for the Garfiled hugs..

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  4. I really like the optimisitc idea that dark clouds can lift. Well done, Michelle.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…😇😇😇

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  5. mrswrangler says:

    It was sad but beautiful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you😍

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you.😀

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  6. utahan15 says:

    hot air
    rising
    proud
    peacock
    is the male tail
    of woe
    so

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you🙂

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  7. Dark clouds will soon fall away, Mich and together you both will see brighter clouds that flow ever beautifully in your life. Such a deep and poignant poem. Too good.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kamal..always…🙂🙂🙂

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      1. You are always welcome dear Mich 🙏🙏🙏

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  8. It resonates with the state I am in. Thankyou for sharing this. 💜

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you too..

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  9. Nice imagery! I like the paper bag clouds

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..😍

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  10. So very lovely. Beautifully written.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you…😊

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  11. murisopsis says:

    My initial thought was “misery loves company” but after another read I see the connection through shared experiences that strengthens the bonds…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Val..i always love your thoughts here..💞💞💞

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  12. Jade M. Wong says:

    I love the dreamy, melancholy tone you have throughout this piece, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Hey, Jade thank you so much..💞💞💞

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje

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  13. ivor20 says:

    May your dark clouds have a silver lining and soon brighten your day… 😀💙🌏

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Ivor..😊

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  14. Aw, I can feel the deep emotions, Mich. 😦
    But soon you will be looking at the same sunny skies and bright moon together!!! 🙂
    Hang in there! 🙂
    HUGS!!! 🙂
    PS…love the balloon photo! When I was a little girl we went to a hot air balloon festival every summer! They are always so different, creative, and beautiful! 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn..i really hope we all get to the light again amidst all these chaos …

      Keep safe and sending you lots of love always..

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  15. Chris Hall says:

    So beautiful and heartfelt, yet leaving us with a hint of hope for the better days that will surely come. It’s a lovely poem, Mich 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Chris…always..🙂🙂🙂

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  16. -Eugenia says:

    Beautiful, Mich! I love “paper bag” clouds.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Eugi..

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        Most welcome, Mich! 😊

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  17. Such a moving piece of poetry, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Shweta .

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  18. Anamikaa says:

    The sun shines even beneath the grey clouds and sooner than we expected it will be all bright and sunny, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..and how are you?

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      1. Anamikaa says:

        Hey Mich, I am good dear.How have you been?

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  19. bejamin4 says:

    Nicely done. You’re right. Those clouds can change to sunshine so quickly. Something to remember.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much and welcome on board..

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      1. bejamin4 says:

        Welcome. Thanks a lot!

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  20. jonicaggiano says:

    Your poem is one filled with hope for our world. You capture that in your poem but put hope for all towards the end. Nicely done my friend.

    “paper bag clouds, drifting under the sun

    dancing through the wind

    taking flight,

    rising above life”

    Great lines, I love the air ballon pictures. Really lovely. ❤️💕 Have a truly blessed day. Love Joni

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Joni..i am so glad you like it..😊😊😊

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      1. jonicaggiano says:

        💕❤️These are difficult times and I can’t imagine what it feels like to be a very young woman currently. Your generation, hopefully will do a much better job at uniting our world than my generation has done. Also there is nothing wrong with writing about your sad feelings. I think it is a healthy and creative way to deal with feelings. I have a lot of hope for the young adults of today. Love ❤️ Joni

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      2. michnavs says:

        Such lovely words Joni..thank you😍😍😍

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  21. Fell in love with your poetry, Again!❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww..thank you..😍😍😍

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  22. Jules says:

    Not all passing storms reveal rainbows… but when we talk with those we love our hearts can take flight 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      I agree Jules..thank you so muçh❤❤❤

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  23. This poem showers love and hope in a beautiful way!

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much

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      1. You’re welcome😊

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