Downpour

how far can my poetry go
that I will never know
I pray it goes way beyond
beyond the gaps of my bleeding lines
farther than my thoughts could travel
louder than my rhythm could utter
faster than my verses could tickle
but one thing for sure though
know my dear
every word
every syllable
every rhythm
every rhyme
and every verses
is filled with magical wishes
of desiring to be where you are
right at the moment
the very moment
my poetry bleeds for you
in as much as my soul longs for yours
just like the deep dark clouds
waiting
agonizing
until
that one huge rain
turns into a one giant downpour

For kate’s friday fun https://aroused.blog/2020/11/28/friday-fun-downpour/

52 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    I love this poem Mich. wonderful words woven together so skillfully.

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much Sadje..

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome 😉

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  2. murisopsis says:

    Love this! I look at it as a literal downpour and you make it into a metaphor for a soul drenching love. This is amazing!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you Val… so glad you love it…(smilesss)

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  3. mrswrangler says:

    Beautiful. I bet some read your poems and never comment.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw thank you so much…😊😊😊

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  4. Athira says:

    Very beautiful poem

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you😊😊😊

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      1. Athira says:

        Most welcome👍🏻🙏🏻

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      2. michnavs says:

        😊😊😊

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  5. it goes to the unniverse and more!! 👏👏👏👏❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yesss to that Cindy…thank you so much..😊😊😊

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      1. You are so welcome Mich! 💕

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      2. michnavs says:

        😊😊😊

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  6. kittysverses says:

    This is beautiful, Mich, full of life. 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kitty..

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Mich. 🙂

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  7. utahan15 says:

    all of you
    what to do?

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  8. This beautiful poem touches the deepest part of where poetry comes from 🙂 Poetry has its own life and will – often reaches far and beyond where we rest it.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much for sharing you thoughts …it adds layers to this poem ..thank you 😊😊😊

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      1. My pleasure, you are very welcome 🙂

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  9. Rupali says:

    So beautiful!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Rupali..😊😊😊

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  10. calmkate says:

    Val said it so well … this is a delightful weaving poetry, love and weather into one good soaking downpour! Thanks so much Mich 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yey…i am so glad you like it…thank you too kate for the prompt.😊😊😊

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      1. calmkate says:

        you excel at these Mich, thank you!

        How’s that post on self-publishing going?

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      2. michnavs says:

        I am doing the “finishing touches” kate..and will email you before i post it..thank you always 😊😊😊

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      3. calmkate says:

        yea, thanks Mich!

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  11. maria says:

    As always, you write such beautiful poems, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      hello maria… thank you so much dear..

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  12. Oh, SweetMich! Your poems touch the highest star, the deepest-saddest soul…and everything/everyone in between! It is so exciting that your poems will live on for generations….so many people will be richer, wiser, and happier because your words rained on them with love. 🙂
    (((HUGS))) ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      awwww… my heart is melting right now with your beautiful words Carolyn…. thank you so so much… thank you always..

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  13. judeitakali says:

    Wow, I’m charmed😍😅

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    1. michnavs says:

      that wow, made me smile.. thank you Jude

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      1. judeitakali says:

        My deep pleasure 🌼

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  14. Beautifully expressed, Mich! ❤️❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much Punam…always

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  15. Deep and magical words so well penned, Mich. Loved your wonderful poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww thank you dear Kamal😊

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      1. You are welcome dear Mich 🙏🙏🙏

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  16. reads like a beautiful cascade poem Mich

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww thank you Gina😍😍😍

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  17. The rain was felt, in part a syllable, a rhythm, a rhyme. All part, of a downpour! Lovely!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much .😍😍

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      1. You’re welcome!

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