Don’t Let Go

10th in the series of ” tell me your song, i’ll write you a poem”

Don’t Let Go


I’ve met you back in time when you and i were young
we had our shares of troubles
and our own separate lives
though i knew i needed you to be by my side
but i kept it cool so you won’t let go
and i thank God for that one time
one time, one moment
when you handed over
a note for me to read
then you smiled
your sweetest smile
and from that day on my love
our lives changed

I knew i loved you then
‘cos everytime you smiled at me
I saw our lives together, a life of love
as we grew old together, with kids
dancing and hanging around
as you silently watched them with awe
and with blissful joy
and i, looked at you, and thanked God for that one time, one time, one moment
when you handed over
a note for me to read
then you smiled
your sweetest smile
and from that day on my love
our lives changed

I can’t believe how lucky I am to have you to love, to hold and behold ’till we get older
and I swear my love, not even death can break us apart, for when we are gone
I promise to find you even in the life after
I know I will see you and you will be there to hand over a note for me to read
then I will thank God, for that one moment again, where you will smile
your sweetest smile
so we can start our lives together
even after life
‘cos baby I love you
so please say “you won’t let go”

no matter how many times we will be apart,
we’ll always have a brand new start


Say You Won’t Let Go- James Arthur
For @randomthoughts569

20 Comments

  1. This is so cute. Lovely poem, and I like that song, too. Well done!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  2. Sadje says:

    Extraordinary love.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed Sadje😊😊😊

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      1. Sadje says:

        πŸ’œβ€οΈ

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  3. ivor20 says:

    So much love, I’m feeling love tremors from a thousand miles away…πŸ’›πŸ’šβ€πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Ivor..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’›πŸ’›

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  4. utahan15 says:

    lord above most talk about love
    she may know joy
    or should i say
    may she know love joy ???

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    1. michnavs says:

      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you😊😊😊

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  5. Aw! Beautiful, SweetMich!
    And what a wonderful song!
    Genuine love just grows even sweeter during the apart times. ❀
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Carolyn..i am glad and thankful you are enjoying this seriesπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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  6. Such beautiful love and a feeling that you create through your poem, simply beautiful πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  7. murisopsis says:

    I just don’t know how you do it! This is another really good take on the song…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Val..

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you 😊😊😊

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