Not You, My Love

the gentle tide
may turn into
a raging wave

but not you my love,

dreams
may turn
into nightmares

but not you my love,

wounds may hurt
and become
lasting scars

but not you my love,

love may fade away
but i believe
yours won’t

no, not yours my love,

some may lose
a battle, go home
wounded

but not you my love,
never really you
for you champion
and perfected
the art of winning

For Eugi’s Weekly Prompt

https://amanpan.com/2021/02/18/eugis-weekly-prompt-champion-february-18-2021/

38 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    You’ve written of a champion and made them so. Bravo.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay… thank you Sadje😊😊😊

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my

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  2. ivor20 says:

    To be alive, and to love, is a win, win, situation

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, yeah so true Ivor😊😊😊

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      1. ivor20 says:

        πŸ˜ŠπŸ’™πŸŒβ€

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  3. utahan15 says:

    dead
    not from my head
    i never had
    such thing
    only in life
    strife
    nearness
    the island
    calls
    but leads
    to only ruin!

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      1. utahan15 says:

        yw congrats on your book. was just viewing athina from courage coaching about shame. very good.

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you so much..😊

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      3. utahan15 says:

        yw. so love of self. some crap on the shelf. no matter which one of those islands ur on

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  4. -Eugenia says:

    Oh, Mich! This is an amazing piece, and one of my favorites of yours. Bravo!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay thank you Eugi…so glad you like it😊😊😊

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      1. -Eugenia says:

        I loved it, Mich!

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  5. Jules says:

    To be in partnership with such a champion – that is what all couples crave!?
    We blind ourselves or help to heal the perceived flaws.
    The knowing that neither, either is perfect without the other πŸ˜‰
    That is when a ‘couple’ wins!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Wow beautiful thoughts Jules thank you so much for sharing that with us…thank you😊😊😊

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  6. It’s lovely to see your beautiful words pop up on my feed, Mich! I’ve got to do some wandering, your many offerings have caught my eye and belatedly I must congratulate you on your published poetry, how wonderful for you!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kim..i am so delighted to see you here… thank you and please send my love to your mom
      ❀❀❀

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  7. Beautiful, SweetMich! A poem full of love, encouragement, support and championing a beloved one! πŸ™‚ Loving and being loved in return is always a win! πŸ˜‰
    (((HUGS))) ❀ πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes, Carolyn its always a win to have such kind of supportive relationship.
      Thank you so much😊😊😊

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  8. murisopsis says:

    Love this one! We all hope to find such a love. I suppose you and I have been very fortunate!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes, Val..we are very fortunate and i pray and wish for the others too..
      Thank you Val😊😊😊

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  9. My heart agrees with your beautiful words, I am so blessed with my hubby. πŸ₯°πŸ€—β€οΈπŸŒΉ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aww so happy for you Jenna😊😊 thank you..

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      1. Love is truly precious ❀️🌹😊

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  10. To have such a love is beautiful. ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you PunamπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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      1. My pleasure. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much

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  11. Superb and brilliant poem, Mich. Loved the subtle pink color and the verses.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay thank you Kamal.
      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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  12. Donna-Luisa says:

    Indeed beautiful🌺😊

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