I Bet You Were Right

remember how we used
to talk ’bout movies and love songs
and happily -ever- after?
you said romance is for the hopeless romantic, for the young,
the careless and the carefeee
I bet you were right,
you were right
‘cos at forty -five,
I’m the same; young,
careless, carefree,
hopeless romantic
still crazy in love with you


remember how we used
to talk ’bout our story
our love story,
you said it could be a beautiful plot
for an original movie storyline pitch
I bet you were right,
your were right
‘cos at forty – five
I still believe, ours is the best
love story ever


For kate
https://aroused.blog/2021/03/13/friday-fun-original/


25 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Aww, such a beautiful poem Mich. 😍🀩

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje😊

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re always welcome my friend

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  2. Chris Hall says:

    I love this, Mich! It’s a super advocate for mature love πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Chris😊😊😊

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  3. What a lovely beautiful poem of love!! I love when we can live ageless in our hearts and minds πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

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    1. michnavs says:

      You are right…thank you..😊😊😊

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  4. Rupali says:

    Lovely! Age doesn’t matter right 😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Right…😊😊😊thank you Rupali

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  5. utahan15 says:

    it was that then
    change
    amend
    and upend
    the tale of two
    is no longer me and you

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  6. calmkate says:

    wow sock it to em baby … priceless, advocation for love thru the ages!

    Thanks for adding your special blend of romance Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks kate..
      Yay i love your reactionπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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      1. calmkate says:

        my pleasure Mich!

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  7. This is SO beautiful, SweetMich!!! πŸ™‚
    β€œLove is ageless and colorless. It is a spiritual force that binds two hearts and two souls together as one.” – Ellen J. Barrier
    Our inner child is ageless, too! πŸ™‚ Yippee!!! πŸ˜€
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yayyyyy ..yesss to timeless, ageless love.
      Thank you Carolyn

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  8. A very sweet piece and it helps me to remember Marla. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw thank you Tom, and it warms my heart to know you are reminded of Marla.

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  9. murisopsis says:

    Love across the years is all the sweeter! Love this one as I can very much relate!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww thank you so much…so glad you can relate here..πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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  10. Garfield Hug says:

    Nice piece as good dedication for Kate

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you GH 😊😊😊

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  11. Kritika says:

    I am sure it is the best love story. Beautiful weaving.

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    1. michnavs says:

      It is…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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      1. Kritika says:

        πŸ™‚ Glad to know. πŸ™‚

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