Your Eyes

oh, how I marveled at
the blazing sun,
its burning heat
its cheerful radiant color
they remind me of your eyes
oh, your eyes, the day I met
you, one morning,
in a room so crowded
there, I saw you, just like
how a girl meets a boy
in the movies, in the novels
your eyes bear a beautiful story
your eyes hold a burning fire for life
your eyes support a wild phenomenal dream
I have your eyes then
etched into my heart,
carved into my soul,
engraved in my thoughts
chiseled in every syllable
inscribed in every verse
of my poetry, of my prose
your eyes
your eyes
my heart’s home
my soul’s resting place
your eyes
your eyes
my love

for kate’s Friday Fun

https://aroused.blog/2021/03/28/friday-fun-etching/

32 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    This is such a C romantic poem Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw… so glad you thought so Sadje…

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      1. Sadje says:

        πŸ’–πŸ˜

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  2. Beautiful poem Mich πŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Radhika😊😊😊

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  3. calmkate says:

    ah shucks, this is beautiful Mrs C … really like this one!

    It’s etched, carved, engraved, chiseled, inscribed into my memory πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awwwww….. i am smiling..really glad you like it kateπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜šπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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      1. calmkate says:

        lol super cute card!

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you kate..

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  4. Miriam says:

    Such a romantic poem Mich. Lovely. πŸ’™

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so muc MiriamπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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      1. Miriam says:

        You’re very welcome

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank youπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

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  5. Romantic and lovely poem, Mich. Loved every stanza.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kamal..always..😊

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      1. You are always welcome dear Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank youπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

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  6. Msdedeng says:

    Sweet!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much😊

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      1. Msdedeng says:

        πŸ™‚

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  7. Romantic, sweet…they eyes do hold all of that! πŸ™‚
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚
    PS…”Anyone can look at others’ eyes, but lovers can see into each others’ souls through the eyes.”. Larry Latta πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes i agree. . Carolyn and thank you so much always 😊😊😊

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  8. murisopsis says:

    Michelle this one melts! It starts off so strong and like sweet butter slides into a pool of silky smoothness – as I fall into those eyes!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww, i love what you said…thank you so much Val.
      πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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  9. My favorite line is, “chiseled in every syllable”

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw thank youπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you ChuckπŸ˜‰

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  10. Jules says:

    Unexpected meetings in crowded rooms πŸ˜€
    I met my hubby in one too!
    Started dating after we met… and well the rest is ‘our’story πŸ’•

    All couples share their ‘our’story – love is powerful, delicate and well just plain lovely!

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    1. michnavs says:

      I agree… we all have our shares of lovely stories to tell and inspire others…

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