Two Poems

Poem #1 – Alone and Lonely

alone and lonely, that has become of you

tired and desolate, after a life so great

a life of wonderful glorious moments

and magnificent past

in old age, you  look back of

what went wrong, and what have

you missed, so, upon this bench

you recollect, the good and the bad;

the best and the worst

 “is it too late, to start over?”

is all that you can ponder

hold on to the good

and let go of the bad

remember the best

and forget the worst

for in life it’s never too, too late

to start over, over again

so, upon this bench you reminisce

only the good, and only the best

and upon this bench you promise

you promise to never,

old age bring you down

Poem #2 – Death

sing me no sad song my dear

cry me no tears,

fear no more

and,

just,

hum me a melody, a melody

I so long to hear,

and remember, remember me

upon this bench,

this park

I vowed, I promised

with your song as the witness

your melody as our guest

and your instrument as our company

to love you and to hold

‘till death do us part

death,

oh, death indeed

torn us apart

For Sadje’s WDY https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2021/05/31/what-do-you-see-84-may-31st-2021/

P.S

I started with just one poem (poem #1 – Alone and Lonely) and when I was about to hit “publish” my romantic muse just got my way, and another poem was conceived (poem #2 – Death)

Which one is your favorite?

28 Comments

  1. Both are equally beautiful and moving. Great takes on the prompt, Mich. ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Shweta😊😊😊

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  2. Two remarkably beautiful poems perfectly befitting the emotions in the picture. Well done!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you so much Mason😊😊😊

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  3. Sadje says:

    Two perspective, both fitting the image. The overall emotion is sadnesses and regret. I like them both. Thanks for joining in Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, glad you like it Sadje..💕💕💕

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      1. Sadje says:

        Always my friend

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  4. utahan15 says:

    age sage
    wisdom
    to wit
    hence our future
    seeds spores

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  5. murisopsis says:

    I love both but the second one has a more emotional component for me…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Val, i know you would love the seond one😊😊😊

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  6. Both amazing and heart-touching. But the 2nd one really touched me deeply.
    (((HUGS))) ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      🤗🤗🤗 yay, thank you Carolyn…😊😊😊

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  7. mrswrangler says:

    Sad but well worded.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you😊

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  8. Awesome and such heart touching words so well composed, Mich. Beautiful poem dear.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kamal😊😊😊

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      1. Welcome Mich ❤️🤗🤗

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  9. Jules says:

    They both tell different tales. One of the individual recollecting and collecting positive energy (I’d like to think).
    And the second of the widower still mourning his beloved, but coping while waiting to be reunited. *sigh*

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ah, you are so right Jules… thank you so much…

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  10. judeitakali says:

    So beautiful. The hope and the inevitability of death😌

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Jude😊

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      1. judeitakali says:

        Very much my pleasure.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Sadje😊😊😊

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  11. Chris Hall says:

    I love the contrast – one of hope and self forgiveness, the other of waiting and wistfulness.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, you made me smile with your comment😊😊😊thank you

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