Rain

I am the gentle rain slowly dripping upon
your windowpane, begging for attention
begging to come in. I am the gentle rain
and if you let me be, I’ll shower you with
the abundance of love and admiration.

let me come, for you will be safe in my arms
let me come as lovely serenade on the roof
and steady drumming on your window
let me nourish you like the rain to the
sweet brown soil.

I am the gentle rain,
and I will be your sweetest
source of blissful solitude
and thoughtful happiness

for Eugis’s Prompt
https://amanpan.com/2021/06/24/eugis-weekly-prompt-happiness-june-24-2021/

33 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    It’s so tempting to let the rain in.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yeahhhh….😊😊😊😊thank you Sadje

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Mich.

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  2. Splendid and marvelous poem on rain that softly flows everywhere. Lovely, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kamal😊😊😊

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      1. Always welcome dear Mich ❀️❀️☺️☺️

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  3. utahan15 says:

    romer asked
    your name again?
    oh yeah the ass
    drilled in
    and a call to his friend
    to stick to it
    man!

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  4. -Eugenia says:

    This is beautiful, Mich! Your poem perfectly captures the bliss of a gentle rain. This is one of my favorites of those that you have written.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, thank you so much Eugenia..so glad you like it😊😊😊😊

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  5. Such a gentle, lovely piece…like the rain falling!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you so much Punam😊😊😊

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      1. My pleasure, dear. 😊

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  6. I love rain-rain…and I really love your poem on a person being the rain in our lives! Beautiful, SweetMich! As the rain YOU (and your words and your poems) bring refreshing renewal to so many of us…and you help us “bloom and blossom” and thrive in life! πŸ™‚ AND you always bring a rainbow with you! 🌈 Thank you! πŸ™‚
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—i love what you just said Carolyn. Thank you so so much for saying that..it warms my heartπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

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  7. murisopsis says:

    This is a wonderful poem! Very evocative of that refreshing and sustaining rain – like kisses from heaven!

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    1. michnavs says:

      AwwwwπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—thank you so much Val…i love that….kisses from heaven😚😚😚

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you Chuck..

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  8. A wonderful and inspiring poem on the rain! I loved it! It was a tremendous inspiration to me! A powerful seed of inspiration that bloomed and blossomed into a poem for me. If you might be interested in reading it let me know:
    chucklindholm@hotmail.com and I will send it to me! I will be forever indebted to you for the spark of inspiration your poem brought to me.
    Chuck
    πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•πŸ’–πŸŒΉπŸŒΉ

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    1. michnavs says:

      wow thank you Chuck.. sending you mail now..

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  9. Dora says:

    Mich,
    You put it so beautifully, the lovely feelings that rain evokes. I’m with you: gentle rain makes me happy.
    pax,
    dora

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Dora…so glad this resonates on you😊

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  10. Thanks for showering us with your rain of love MichπŸ’–πŸ’–
    WE NEED RAIN❣️❣️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ow, thank you Cindy😊😊😊

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      1. of course… xoxox πŸ’–

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  11. judeitakali says:

    Gorgeous, Michelle. πŸ’œπŸ•ŠοΈ

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much Jude…always..

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank youπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  12. earthskyair says:

    That is simply beautiful.🌷

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    1. michnavs says:

      😊😊😊thank you😊

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