Crimson Sky

“I remember you” is so lame
“I think of you” is just an
understatement

for

I did not just remember you
nor did I just think of you

babe,

I long for you.
is that an understatement still?
it could be.

last night,

oh, last night
I saw you, under the moonlight
just beneath the horizon
where the earth separates
from the sky
standing tall and charming
smiling

now, that’s pure fantasy.
maybe it is, but babe, I saw you,
I swear I did.
How could I be wrong?
It was you.
I hear you.
I feel you.

and,

As I scribble to get this to you

here’s hoping that we were looking
at the same crimson sky last night
with our silent whispers suspended
in the air, “never let go.”

I hope you saw me too.

15 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    This is a tender and spicy poem Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw thank you Sadje..i love that..tender and spicy..

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my friend

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  2. Wow! Nice one Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Radhika ..😊😊😊

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  3. Ah!! aww!! Just a lovely feeling reading this …so beautiful!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, thank you..happy to give you that lovely feeling

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  4. murisopsis says:

    The perils of long distance love… You make it seem a whisper away from being together in heart and mind and soul!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes Val….😊😊😊thank you so much..i love your lovely visits with yout equally lovely comments

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  5. longingly yours and lovely Mich💖

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay😊😊😊thanks Cindy

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      1. indeed💖💖

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  6. Northside says:

    Beautiful poem❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you…

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