Baby, Take Me Home

i’m down and drowned, and the lucid moon
appears as heaven’s eye, it’s a cold night
i’m whimpering and whispering,
in the silence of my longing heart,
in the silence of the bewitching light

what brought me here, what tore us apart?
we should be together instead of being apart
so here i am wondering what went wrong
in the middle of somewhere, i am here and you are there
this love, oh, this love is so strong

i’m down and drown in my bed, and
night whispers, nothing but your name
i’m wailing and sobbing, how can i let this happen
how can i let you be just a shadow in the dark
a silhouette against my dimming sky

i’m begging for the night to be over and stop whispering your name, ‘cos baby it’s killin’ me
it’s suffocating, as i look up at the blanket of stars laid perfectly into the sky guiding my eyes
to maybe, just maybe, not infinity but to you


so send me home, walk me back in time ‘cos baby
i find happiness in just your memories no more
i am tired, tired of remembering every single detail ’bout you, ’bout us, i don’t want you to be just a memory, i don’t want us to be just a history

baby take me home, fly me back,
into your  loving arms where i belong
baby take me home, fly me back
to our love, where we once belonged

so baby, just take me home 

23 Comments

  1. utahan15 says:

    man love i m changed
    turned inside out
    rearranged
    no matter
    how strange
    i am the dead
    living
    walking
    and hurting more than you could ever know~

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  2. Sadje says:

    A heartbreaking poem Mich๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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      1. Sadje says:

        Youโ€™re welcome โ˜บ๏ธ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  3. murisopsis says:

    Gah! The pathos of a relationship ending and one party regretting the decision to part ways!! You evoked the emotions as if serving a slice of cake – loved it and felt my heart contract at the same time!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, wow thank you Val…i am elated by your comment….thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. Heartbreakingly beautiful, Mich. ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Shweta๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

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      1. You’re most welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. Heartbreakingly beautiful, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Punam๐Ÿค—

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      1. My pleasure, dear. ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

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  6. Awesome and beautiful poem, Mich. Thoroughly enjoyed ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you always Kamal๐Ÿฅฐ

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      1. Welcome dear Mich ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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  7. Poignant and heart-touching, yet beautiful, SweetMich! โค
    Love is always worth our time and effort…we learn, we grown, we become our best-selves.
    (((HUGS)))

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much dear Carolyn๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  8. Carol anne says:

    this is stunning! โค

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Carol๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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