Poverty – An Oddquain

Poverty – An Oddquain

poor
my heart now
in dire need, begging
for that familiar embrace
yours

Oddquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines, developed by Glenda L. Hand.

for Val’s

https://murisopsis.wordpress.com/2021/07/30/looking-for-an-august-scavenger-hunt/

28 Comments

  1. murisopsis says:

    We are all poorer without love!! Wonderful take on this prompt!

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    1. michnavs says:

      yay, thank you so much Val.. i am enjoying your poetry prompts…

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  2. Garfield Hug says:

    Learnt about Oddquain. Thanks

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you GH😊😊😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thanks Sadje

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  3. Wow! Lovely take, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Punam😊😊😊

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      1. My pleasure. 😊

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  4. calmkate says:

    lol you will never be deprived of love or hugs in your family πŸ™‚
    Great take Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      😊😊😊you are right kate…thank youπŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. calmkate says:

        HUGS right back!

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks Kate😊

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  5. A beautiful take on the prompt, Mich

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Shweta😊😊😊

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      1. You are welcome β€πŸ€—πŸ˜Š

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  6. ivor20 says:

    “oddly” enough I do not know of this Format Mich… so I have copied it my ‘growing’ list of Poetry Formats .. πŸ™‚πŸ€—

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    1. michnavs says:

      Lol…thanks Ivor ..give it a tryπŸ€—

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      1. ivor20 says:

        Maybe I will … πŸ˜‰

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much😊

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  7. Jules says:

    Reminds me very much of the young learning about falling in and out of love. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, yeah…thank you Jules😊

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  8. So lovely, so beautiful, so perfect!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..so happy you like it…😊😊😊

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