Breathe

πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’• Happy Sunday dear friends and poets…

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Still grateful for all you love and support.

“I Will Love You Forever, Too” is now available via paperback in Amazon

if i am to breathe my last breath, i’d inhale the first air i gasped the day i laid my eyes on you, ‘cos darling in my last moment  i’d love to be reminded of how you breathe life into my soul, into my heart; would it be then too much to ask “God, let my death wish be, to see you smile as i go”.

39 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    This is such a lovely poem Mich. I’m so happy for your success 😍

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Sadje….for all your support.πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my friend

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  2. calmkate says:

    oh my goodness Mich you have taken love/death to whole new level with this one πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, you made me smile Kate…thank you so much…πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. calmkate says:

        my pleasure Mich πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        I miss your Friday fun😊😊😊

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      3. calmkate says:

        yes it was a lovely gathering of a regular few!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much

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  3. I agree with, Kate. Your poetry is on another level now.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Wow, thank you Punam…πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. My pleasure. πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  4. Garfield Hug says:

    Endless love well prosed! Good job Michnavs and am glad your publications are doing so well. πŸ‘πŸŒΉπŸ’πŸΎ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much GH .πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  5. I too agree completely with Kate, Mich. You have really taken this poem to a new level of love and beauty.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kamal…😊😊😊

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      1. Welcome always dear Mich πŸ€—β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ

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  6. Beautiful! This brought the tears flowing. Memories flood me of sitting by the bedside of too many dying family members and close friends.
    (((HUGS))) ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, hugs dear Carolyn…thank you so much always..😊😊😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Your welcome.

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  7. Olivia Ava says:

    Amazing writing🧑

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you so much😊

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  8. murisopsis says:

    A bittersweet poem! The smile at the end really got me!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you ValπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  9. So deeply beautiful!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so muchπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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  10. such wonderful memories evoked and love in your poem MichπŸ’–πŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much Cindy…..

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      1. you’re most welcome MichπŸ’–

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  11. Jules says:

    There are many older couples who have been known to pass close in time to each other – the one seemingly not being able to live without the other. This piece though is romantic πŸ˜€
    Brings to mind the first time I met and danced with my guy… now over 40 years!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Wow, that is amazing Jules…bless you and your hubby..πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—thank you so much…

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