Fly High ( A Waltz Wave)

Fly High ( A Waltz Wave)

I’ll
Caress
Your
Weary
Heart and soul
With my
Love
So true,
Undying
Forever too
I will be
Your wings
To
Fly high
Upon the sky
Reaching
Your
Dreams my
Dear

For Sadje’s WDYS https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2021/09/06/what-do-you-see-98/

This is Waltz Wave form developed by Leo Waltz. It is a syllabic form with a title and 19 lines. The subject should be calming. The syllabic pattern is: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1. Words may be split to fit the pattern. There is no rhyme. Thanks to Val https://murisopsis.wordpress.com/2021/09/03/looking-calm/

29 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    A lovely poem Mich. you’re so good at writing beautiful love poems. Thanks for joining in

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much Sadje, so glad you like it.. funny story though, i had set my alarm as i waited for your photo prompt… but i overslept, didn’t hear the alarm ..lol…

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      1. Sadje says:

        Aww, that’s so sweet of you my dear friend

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  2. Chris Hall says:

    “…I will be your wings…” – love it!

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    1. michnavs says:

      aw, thank you Chris…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Punam 😊😊😊

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  3. CL says:

    This is lovely. πŸ™‚

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  4. mrswrangler says:

    A simple but beautiful poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so muchπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

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  5. utahan15 says:

    lady godiva too
    was a bare
    holy rider
    love the test
    and the breast

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  6. Jules says:

    Ooh. A new short form to try.
    Lovely romantic verse too. πŸ’•

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Jules….😊😊😊

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  7. murisopsis says:

    I knew it would be wonderful! And of course I am correct!! You made this form take wing for sure and certain!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Val for introducing another lovely form…😊😊

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  8. An interesting form and a beautiful poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much and welcome on board😊

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  9. Ah, a beautiful love story Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Radhika😊

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  10. calmkate says:

    lol another smoochy one, well done!

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you kate…so much…

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  11. This was a lovely response to the picture! I really enjoyed it.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much.😊

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  12. judeitakali says:

    So beautiful πŸ˜ƒ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Jude😊

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