Sunset Upon The Horizon

i am grateful for the sun and how it sets magicaly upon the horizon
it’s like rhyming the last verse of my poetry
ending with the perfect combination of
rhythm and rhyme
a captivating nourishment for my ever thirsty poetic soul

i am grateful for the sun and how it sets enchantingly upon the horizon
it’s like humming the most romantic love song
with its soothing and calming melody
bringing a restful respite
to my wary soul

i am grateful for the sun and how it sets entrancingly upon the horizon
it’s like coming home to your tender kisses, with the warmth of you embrace
gifting my heart with the passion it so long wanted

i am grateful for the sun and how it reminds me
of you, of our love, born upon one fateful afternoon as it sets spellbindingly upon the horizon

there was you
there was me

and the sunset

for Sadje WDYS

35 Comments

  1. Excellent Michelle๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. utahan15 says:

    between the rise and set
    cross
    and yet
    inre
    humanity
    kudos

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  3. Sadje says:

    Wonderful poetry Mich. I love how you have ended it with a declaration of love! Thanks for joining in with this lovely poem

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you too for the beautiful photo prompt Sadje…๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  4. murisopsis says:

    A delightful poem about that first meeting of two hearts that become one!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Val…always…๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  5. Chris Hall says:

    ‘Spine-tinglingly’ gorgeous. There’s something magical about the sunset, and you’ve brought it to us so well, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww wow .. i love how you describe it Chris…thank you..

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  6. Awww, that’s such a sweet poem, Mich. I loved it ๐Ÿ˜

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Shweta๐Ÿ˜Š

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  7. I really like the repetition and the creative and beautiful comparisons.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…so glad you like it๐Ÿ˜Š

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  8. Mother Wintermoon says:

    Beautiful love poem. Thereโ€™s nothing like the glow of a romantic sunset. โค๏ธ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š

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  9. What is life without love! Wonderful, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      oh, wow thank you Punam…

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      1. You are welcome, dear….

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  10. Kally says:

    Oh so beautifully written

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kally..

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  11. mrswrangler says:

    Beautiful. Love the picture.

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much..

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  12. Beautiful, SweetMich!
    ” you, me, and the sunset”…the perfect โค trio!
    (((HUGS))) ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much Carolyn…

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  13. Akhila says:

    So sweetโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  14. calmkate says:

    the repetitions and rhymes really make this one pop Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you kate…always..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje๐Ÿ˜Š

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  15. Susi Bocks says:

    Beautiful, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Susi๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. Susi Bocks says:

        You’re welcome! ๐Ÿ™‚

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