Happy Pill (A Double Aloueta)

Happy Pill (A Double Aloueta)

happy hormone pill

that’s what you are still

so deliciously tempting

always crave for more

keep a bunch to store

sweet, sinful, agonizing

heaven is your taste

i ingest in haste

my blissful and sinful friend

once never enough

i want more so bad

a friend or a foe indeed

For Sadje’s WDYS https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2021/10/11/what-do-you-see-103-october-11-2021/

Aloueta was created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, (12 lines or more)

with the following set rules: Syllabic: 5/5/7/5/5/7 Rhyme Scheme:  aabccb

The form name is a French word meaning β€˜skylark’ or larks that fly high, the association to the lark’s song being appropriate for the musical quality of this form.

Thanks to Kate for introducing this form https://aroused.blog/2021/10/04/aloueta/

30 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    At first I thought you were talking about drugs! But yes sugar is the happy drug! What a sweet poem Mich. thanks for joining in

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    1. michnavs says:

      πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†thank you too Sadje…

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome ☺️

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  2. That’s some complex poetry made deliciously good. Well done, Michelle.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Mason…😊😊

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  3. Happy pill indeed! Good one, Mich! πŸ˜„

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, they are Punam…thank you..

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      1. You are welcome, dear.

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  4. calmkate says:

    lol you aced it Mich, love the innuendo here … we all love a sugar hit!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, so glad you like it Kate…thank you so much.

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      1. calmkate says:

        welcome Mich … think I’ve said it before, you have talent πŸ™‚

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      2. michnavs says:

        πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—aw, thank you Kate

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  5. murisopsis says:

    It is a delightful double dose! Once again I’ve missed out on my free doughnut this week! I’ll have another chance come tomorrow!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Val…always…😊😊😊

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  6. Chris Hall says:

    This made me smile… sweetly! Love it, Mich πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks Chuck…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…

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  7. OH, my, yes! A happy pill, for sure! πŸ˜€ Your poem tastes delicious! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚
    🍩 🍩 🍩

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    1. michnavs says:

      😊😊😊😊thank you so much Carolyn..

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  8. rothpoetry says:

    Your poem made me smile. I thought at first you were talking about a girl.

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    1. michnavs says:

      aw, so glad to make you smile… thank you for dropping by..

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      1. rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome!

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  9. SamSahana says:

    Brilliant take! Very very sweet (pun intended).

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  10. Jules says:

    Ah… yes the sugar snack!
    I remember singing the children’s song Alouette – in French.
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alouette_(song)
    Not knowing until years later what it translated too!
    But it was tamed a bit to teach parts of the body… still an odd rhyme for an odd reason.

    Thanks for sharing the new form. πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, thanks for sharing this song Jules..😊😊😊

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