I Long For You

I Long For YOU

i’ve seen hell in the eyes of men
ripping off the dreams, murdering the future
of young girls around whenever they deemed
to have power and control over

yet,

i’ve seen heaven in YOUR eyes
heaven is in YOUR arms

i’ve witnessed evil in the presence of pretentious men
camouflaging as righteous, pretending to be virtuous
wanting to manipulate, craving to exploit

yet,

i’ve witnessed the good in YOU
good is in YOUR existence

i’ve experienced blazing inferno inside my heart
a raging fire causing great distress
a violent flame burning my hopes, my dreams

yet,

i’ve felt tranquility by mere mention of YOUR name
there is comfort inYOUR  words
there is calmness in YOUR  actions

and so,

i long for YOU, always

Song – Hunger and Thirst

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13 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    It is heavenly to find that the person you love is indeed deserving of your admiration too. Beautiful poem Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Sadje.😊

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome my dear friend

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much😊

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  2. YAY!!! and so thankful for the good men in the world! We are blessed to have them…and it is so special when we have one particular one! ❤ 🙂 And, I know for me, he, and his love for me, helps me want to be one of the good women in the world. 🙂 Being a good person is not something we do, it's something we are! ❤
    Beautiful poem, SweetMich!
    (((HUGS))) 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes, amen Carolyn…thank you so much for sharing your thoughts…🥰🥰🥰

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much😊

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  3. murisopsis says:

    Although this reads as a love letter to a lover – it could also be a love song/letter to God… It works so well each way! Love the capitalized words for emphasis!

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    1. michnavs says:

      I am so glad you found it fitting both ways….thank you so much Val…😊

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