Together, In A Crowded Place

Together, In A Crowded Place

in a spot where the crowd is proud
to strut and to flaunt all that they have
from a bejeweled phone case to the latest
fashion trend, to what’s new, what’s hot

in the same spot, the same scene, the same place
i’d flaunt not my Rolex Zenith Daytona watch
nor my bloody red Louis Vuitton Brentwood bag
not even my Hermes Oran slides

in a multitude of people gathered to share
their daily routines, life updates, even dreams
i’d talk not of how my life has been so far
or my “what ifs” and my hundreds of “maybes”

in a jam-packed crowded place, i’d show off
my most precious, dearest, valuable piece
that no amount of hard cash or ready money
could compensate to pay, to buy, to acquire

in a huddled place, loaded with different faces
i’d display with great pride, with honor, and
a smile on my face, i’d take your hand, together,
let’s reveal to the world what true love is

baby, hold my hand, in a crowded place
together, let’s flaunt each other, with
nothing but the undying love in our hearts
and the hope of true love forever

let’s do what they call crazy weird
a public display of affection
in a crowded place, damn!
who cares! 

22 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Love is the best thing to share to flaunt. ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ahhhh so agree with you Sadje…thank you😊

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my dear

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  2. mrswrangler says:

    I love this poem. Brings back memories when I learned to be me and not to try to compete with others in college. Life was much simpler after that.

    But I love when Wrangler walks with his arm around me. Or walks holding my hand. It gives me a feeling of being loved and cherished.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ahhh such a wonderful memory ….it is indeed the most wonderful feeling to walk beside your beloved…thank you for sharing this with us here..πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  3. Very nice and beautiful poem, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kamal..😊😊

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      1. Welcome always Mich β€οΈπŸ™‚

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  4. utahan15 says:

    plastic in my pocket
    money lanyard is my own locket!

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  5. Right on! YES! I love this, SweetMich! I agree 100%! We do that here! πŸ˜‰
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—thank you so much Carolyn…

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  6. murisopsis says:

    Love this daring to flaunt what is priceless!! True love indeed!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Val…so much..😊😊😊

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  7. calmkate says:

    lovely, love how you flaunt your true love, hubby must be bedazzled πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much kate😊😊

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  8. Smiles and smile you give me with this amazing love and poem :)))

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw…i am thrilled to know it made you smile.☺☺☺thank you…

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      1. You are most welcome πŸ™‚

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  9. we all need someone to walk with .. this is beautiful Mich!πŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ahhh so true Cindy…so true..

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