Then Came Along You

Then Came Along You

my memory has become hazy
remembering what was crazy

my heart has become indifferent
loving like a true blooded poet

my soul has become cold
feeling the warmth so odd

my eyes has become bleak and blurry
looking for the future in a dark starry sky

my body has become weak and weary
fighting the urge to keep my bravery

then came along you

Written for:

Sadje’s WDYS https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2022/01/24/what-do-you-see-118-january-24-2022/

Eugi’s https://amanpan.com/eugis-weekly-prompt-hazy-january-25-2022/

You can still vote for my poem “Holding Hands” as Publication of the year at spillwords kindly click this link https://spillwords.com/vote/ and to all those who have voted, thank you very much

35 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Beautifully done Mich. I love the gradual fading of the ink in the last lines. Presence of someone special can change things a lot. Thanks for joining in

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Sadje😊

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      1. Sadje says:

        Always my pleasure

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  2. Maria says:

    Beautiful Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  3. murisopsis says:

    This is so good! ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Val😊

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  4. Lovely and awesome poem, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kamal😊

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      1. Welcome Mich ❀️

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  5. Aw, so beautiful! New love, true love

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much😊

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  6. Eugenia says:

    Beautiful piece, Mich! I love the ending. ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Eugi😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much

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  7. rajkkhoja says:

    So beautiful write up love poetry. Amazing end line. βœοΈπŸ‘Œ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Chuck😊

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  8. AW! So so so true! Beautiful, too! ❀
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn..πŸ€—

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  9. Absolutely beautiful! πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  10. calmkate says:

    true to your style, I’ve already voted!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so so much KateπŸ€—

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      1. calmkate says:

        pleasure Mich!

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  11. Chris Hall says:

    Another wonderful tribute to true love… *sigh*

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thanks so much Chris .πŸ€—πŸ€—

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  12. lovely write on the prompt Mich! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thanks so much Cindy…πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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      1. you’re so welcome. I can’t get you in my favorites for some reason Mich? weird! πŸ’–

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      2. michnavs says:

        Ohhh no, WP glitches …πŸ˜”

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