
My Unpoetic Poem
i could travel to faraway places
i could meet people with different faces
i may look like a teenage lass writing a piece
for trying to rhyme as i seriously cringe
truth is this may sound ridiculous maybe
but baby the world is in chaos and agony
a little something whimsical won’t be corny
to put a smile on your frowning face lately
pandemic has broken our hearts
it has toppled down our souls
as if it’s not enough, Russia has rage a war
or is it Russia really to be blamed by far?
the pains we imposed upon ourselves is even worst
it triggers emotions from beyond and outmost
self inflicted pain as you call it lately
when will it go anyway?
so tell me dear, how do i make you smile
and maybe, just maybe forget for a while
that the price of petroleum has skyrocted
your contemplating a lot and its not bad
you see i’m not really making sense at all
i wanna make you smile a bit please don’t fall
this is not a bait nor a trap or whatsoever
not even giving up my poetic soul for sure
here’s hoping my no nonsence whimsical poem
would make you happy even if you think we are doomed
so do i need to travel to far away places?
and meet people with different faces?
the answer is no ‘cos you to me is enough
to carry on and fight the battle so tough
A whimsical poem to make us smile. Well done Mich.
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Yay, and i am so happy it made you smile Sadjeβ€ππ
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This is so perfect, beautiful non-poem, you actually say all that matters, while saying it as if there is nothing much being said – as if filling the gaps until you manage to put a smile on me – you actually very meaningfully and easily give me quite a few smiles, as I am also dealing with some thoughts about the world in between. Oh yes you did make me smile :))
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And i am smiling from where i am now Pragalbhaπππso happy really that this piece made you smile ..ππBless you always
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Very well said poem, Mich. Even though with so much happening from the last three years we have to move on.
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Indeed Kamal..thank youππ
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Welcome dear Mich ππ
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This is a delightful poem, Mich and I love it! You’ve expressed very meaningful words and with a touch of whimsy. π€β€οΈ
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Thank you Eugi..glad you like it ππ
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My pleasure, Mich!π
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much..ππ
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Your welcome.
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so unusual, nice train of thought!
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Thank you so much Kate..
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Alas this is a post that I tried to comment on while on vacation. It is a wonderful poem and packs quite the emotional punch!
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Yay, thank you Val..i am so glad you like it..
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A good one for a change.. ππΌπ€©ππΌππΌππΌ.. Loved it Mich..
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Uay, thank you so much..
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Such a great piece Mich! ππ
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Thank youπ€
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The truest connections will get us through! Lovely, Mich!
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Thank you so much Susi..β€
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You’re very welcome, Mich! β€
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