
If It Ain’t Love
everything was surreal like a honeydew in blue
when you whispered silently with a smile
“i love you”.
everything was surreal like trickle of enchanting snowflakes falling softly and gently on a hot summer afternoon.
there were flashes of colors and joyous sounds of music playing like New Year’s eve in November morn’.
there were angels singing heavenly songs in their perfectly oh so good voices like we were in a magical realm.
and i couldn’t agree more with poets and romantics alike that love is indeed in between magic and reality.
for how else would you call the butterfies in my stomach everytime you gave me that sweet loving look of longing?
for how else would you explain the fact that i am truly, madly, passionately in love with you head over heels?
if it ain’t love, then i don’t know what else to say.
For NaPoWriMo Day 7
And now for our (optional) prompt! Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that argues against, or somehow questions, a proverb or saying. They say that “all cats are black at midnight,” but really? Surely some of them remain striped. And maybe there is an ill wind that blows some good. Perhaps that wind just has some mild dyspepsia. Whatever phrase you pick, I hope you have fun complicating its simplicity. Happy writing!
“Real love is what you feel it. You see it, and you show it! But fake love is just made of words”
for Eugi’s weekly prompt:
What a feel good piece of writing Mich. 💜
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Thank you so much Mirriam🤗
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Sigh… oh yes ‘love is indeed in between magic and reality’
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Aw, indeed Bree…thank you❤
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Love can sometimes come at us disguised – but the love you write about is unabashed, bold, and on display for all to see!!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Yay, i love what you said here…thank you so much Bal..❤❤❤
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Love this lovely poem Mich
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Thank you Sadje..❤🤗
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Always my pleasure
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This is sweet to read. I love the similes and idioms used. All the styles perfectly blend. Simply amazing!
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Thank you so much..🙏💛
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Feel most welcome, Mich 💖
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Sometimes love feels surreal,but I have found during the years and many tears, true love is hear to stay … 💕
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Aw, you are so true Ivor …thank you🤗
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I love the gentle romanticism in this poem; it gave me a warm feeling on a cold and windy morning!
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Yay, that makes me so happy..thank you so much🙏❤
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Sounds like love to me!!! 😉 ❤️ What beautiful memories woven together into a beautiful poem! ❤️
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Aw,❤❤❤ thanks so much Carolyn..
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It’s love all the way. Your poems are so filled with it, Mich.
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Thank you so much Smitha❤
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Fantastic, Mich! I love this 💕🙂
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Thank you so much💛
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So so beautiful job done!!
Whole piece is awesome, Mich.
These lines are my fav, “there were flashes of colors and joyous sounds of music playing like New Year’s eve in November morn’.”
🙏💗💗💗💗
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Yay, thank you so much…it warmed my poet heart..💛
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💗💕
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What a lovely and uplifting poem, Mich, and so full of magic! 💖
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Thank you Eugi..💛🙏
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My pleasure, Mich. 😉
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Love is indeed between beauty and enchanted love. Such a lovely poem, Mich. Loved it.
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Thank you Kamal…always..
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Most welcome Mich ❤️
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Lovely write, Mich! ❤️
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Thank you Punam🙏💛
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I love the whimsical mood of this poem, Mich. Very sweet and charming! ❤
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Aw, thank you so much Cheryl..🙏💛
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Superb.. Bravo.. 👏🏼👏🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼🤗💕
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Thank you…🙏💕
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