Pitter- Patter

Day 22 NaPoWriMo

In honor of today’s being the 22nd day of Na/GloPoWriMo 2022, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that uses repetition. You can repeat a sound, a word, a phrase, or an image, or any combination of thing

Pitter- Patter

i said i love you
you said i love you more

i whispered i miss you
you whispered back i miss you more

i said i do love you really
you said i do love you really more

we could beat rappers
vying for rap beat titles

even the pitter- patter of raindrops
with our unending exchange of “more”

we love unconditionally as evident
in our words and affection

and at the same time we could be
pretty mess up on some occassions

for like mirrors we see the beauty
yet it we become deadly when broken

19 Comments

  1. Sounds like hubby and I 😉 So lovely, Mich 💕🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yayyyy….i can imagine you both..❤

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  2. This is far-reaching. When love happens it’s so strong and inescapable, though the other party may not always fully understand. Such a revealing piece ❤😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      I so agree Lamittan…some may not understand…thank you…

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      1. That’s very true. You’re most welcome. Always 💖

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  3. mrswrangler says:

    Very lovely. Have a good weekend.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you and have a blessed weekend..

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        Thank you and you’re welcome.

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  4. Sadje says:

    Lovely poem. I think it’s a sweet way of proclaiming love.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed…thank you Sadje…❤💕

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  5. love the pitter pattering of love exchanged here Mich! 💖💖

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Cindy..💕🙏

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  6. murisopsis says:

    Wow! That last stanza was powerful and packed a punch!! Truly love can become dangerous when broken!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed Val…thank you so much. ❤💕

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  7. You nailed the challenge! Great title! Your poem is so powerful and true.
    (((HUGS))) ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay…thank you so much💕💕💕

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