Mikaela

Day 25 of NaPoWriMo – Today’s (optional) prompt is based on the aisling, a poetic form that developed in Ireland. An aisling recounts a dream or vision featuring a woman who represents the land or country on/in which the poet lives, and who speaks to the poet about it. Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that recounts a dream or vision, and in which a woman appears who represents or reflects the area in which you live. Perhaps she will be the Madonna of the Traffic Lights, or the Mysterious Spirit of Bus Stops. Or maybe you will be addressed by the Lost Lady of the Stony Coves. Whatever form your dream-visitor takes, happy writing!

For Sadje’s WDYS: https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2022/04/25/what-do-you-see-131-april-252022/

Mikaela

i’ve never lost sight of you lately, in my dreams and in people i see
you’re the one thing my heart’s been crying for months now
with tears in my eyes i saw you walked me through my own childhood
the games that children play, to which i failed to do
’twas so fun seeing you skip and hop; shout and yell.

you were there too maybe when i was talking to a friend one afternoon
as i couldn’t get you off my mind, you keep coming out through my words
the things we would have done together, and the places we would have visited sooner
the friends and relatives you would have met around
would surely be happy and gay just by mere mention of you.

one night you showed me how your growing days would be
carefree and jolly, that’s how you want your days woud be
you walked me through the playground you wish to go
with the slides and the swing; you taught me to be play along
i swear i’d do everything just to keep you and see you smile all along
i swear i’d be keeping you company in all that you wanna do
i swear to be fun around.

i never lost sight of you and i never i wanted to, for i got your name
tattoed in my heart, in my mind and in my soul
you will be loved and remembered wherever you are
just promise me, you visit me always in my dream
show me places you’ve been to, show me things you’ve done.

make me the happiest by witnessing you become the wonderful woman i’ve always thought you’d be
losing you is tantamount to losing one pontentially good human being
come back anytime soon let’s read my favorite childhood books
let’s master multiple wordgames or we could play hide and seek; a game mama failed to do as a child.

but first let me start by calling you Mikaela, which means “one who is like God”.

43 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Such a heartfelt tribute Mich. Beautiful use of the image to write to your dream companion. Thanks for joining in

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Sadje…i love the photo prompt this week.

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome 🙏🏼

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, thank you Sadje..💕🙏

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  2. kim881 says:

    Your poem is so poignant and very touching, Michelle. These lines got me in particular:
    ‘you were there too maybe when i was talking to a friend one afternoon
    as i couldn’t get you off my mind, you keep coming out through my words’
    and
    ‘come back anytime soon let’s read my favorite childhood books
    let’s master multiple wordgames or we could play hide and seek; a game mama failed to do as a child’.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kim for highlighting these lines…i appreciate you visiting and commenting..

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  3. Chris Hall says:

    This is beautiful, Mich💚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Chris..💕❤

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  4. Reena Saxena says:

    Such a moving piece!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Reena…💕

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  5. Like what everyone else has said, what beautiful poetry

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Maria…💕🙏

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  6. Arti Jain says:

    I lost my brother when he was ten and I was fifteen. Your poem has brought back so many happy memories. It’s resonated with me deeply. Thank you for writing it Mich. Thank you.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, i am so sorry to know that.🙏😔 anf

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  7. Heart wrenching and beautiful, Mich 💕🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Harmony.

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  8. murisopsis says:

    At first I thought this was a child relinquished for adoption, then I felt it was an imaginary friend, and finally it was a missing sister – all these and at last I recognized it as a guardian angel… Beautiful poem that took me places in my heart!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, thank you so much Val..💕🙏

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  9. This poem touched my heart, Mich. You have composed it so well and the picture said it all. You made me remember my young days.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kamal..❤

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      1. Welcome dear Mich 💞

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  10. Aww, this is so sad, and yet so special as a tribute. Well done, Michelle.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Mason..❤

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  11. so heartfelt Mich!
    💖

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Cindy..❤

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  12. Such a beautiful photo and poem duet, SweetMich!
    Your poem is a heart-toucher and a soul-toucher. It reminds me of memories, and my thoughts, of two of my sisters, and several of my friends. ❤️
    (((HUGS)))

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so so much Carolyn❤🙏

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  13. Very touching, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Punam.❤

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  14. Bella Reyes says:

    Such a touching piece! Truly beautiful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…❤

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