Promise

Promise

it’s just been days
not even months
and here we are
struggling to keep the grip
already at the brink
of losing a tight hold
of what’s suppose to be
a promise
i hope we hang on
‘cos it’s getting
harder each
passing day

For David’s Weekly Prompt:

30 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    A sad reality for many.

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    1. michnavs says:

      It is Sadje…thank you..

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      1. Sadje says:

        Youโ€™re most welcome my friend

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  2. calmkate says:

    Spencer’s bright artwork adds to your lovely poem Mich … nice to see local works!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kate…๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™

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  3. VJ says:

    This so well composed and presented, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much VJ..

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  4. True.. Nice piece, a great reminder Mich.. โค๐Ÿ’•

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’•

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  5. murisopsis says:

    Keeping promises can be so very difficult when the world comes barging in! I love the idea that you are holing on and holding onto hope!

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    1. michnavs says:

      So true Val its really hard to keep up with our promises with all the obstacles around..

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  6. murisopsis says:

    *holding on* I’m tired and my hands are not hitting the keyboard with enough force!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Its okay Val….have a good rest๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’•

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  7. this is so heartfelt. โค

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Rosie

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  8. So true. So heart-touching. Your words can apply to so many areas of life/times in life. ๐Ÿ™‚ A heart-touching poem from your heart to our hearts. ๐Ÿ™‚ โค๏ธ
    And the pairing of your poem with the painting by Spencer is so beautiful. ๐Ÿ™‚
    (((HUGS))) ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn..
      I am so happy you like this along with the painting…๐Ÿ’•

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  9. nicely done.. so realistic Mich! ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Cindy๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™

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      1. Always Mich/! My pleasure !๐Ÿ’–

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      2. A pleasure Mich!๐Ÿ’•

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  10. You have caught that feeling so well – holding onto a promise. I love the combination with the artwork too.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’ซ

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  11. Gosh, Mich, you speak for so many of us… I feel like I’ve been “holding on” for years now… *sigh* – my ride has been pretty bumpy!

    I really adore this piece. Thank you for joining W3!

    Much love,
    David [ben Alexander]

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much David..i am happy you like this..๐Ÿ’•

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      1. Mich, if you’re interested, the 2nd W3 is live:

        https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/05/11/w3-prompt-2-weave-written-weekly/

        Much love,
        David

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thank you David..checking in now

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  12. Anita Bacha says:

    Struggling to keep the grip! We are all on the same boat, Mich! Inspiring write!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Anitaโค

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