A Bit of my Heart

A Bit of my Heart

can you hear the voice of my heart?
can you hear its cry and agony?
can you hear it screams your name?
your name. your name.

can you see the face of my heart?
can you see how lonely and empty it is?
can you see it longs for your smile?
your smile. your smile.

can you feel my heart?
can you feel  its sorrow and affliction?
can you feel how it yearns for your touch?
your touch. your touch.

i wonder did you even get to know my heart at all?
did you even get to understand how it beats of a hundred million love for you?
did you even realize how deeply it love you for years and years?

do you know even a bit of my heart?
i bet you don’t that’s why you left
and took on the easy way out.

34 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Such a deeply profound poem Mich. it almost reads like a song. Thanks a lot for joining in.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you too for this prompt Sadje..

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      1. Sadje says:

        It’s a pleasure

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje..

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  2. Chris Hall says:

    I love those mournful echoes, Mich. πŸ’”

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Chris..πŸ’•πŸ™

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  3. Miriam says:

    Full of emotion and deeply moving words Mich. ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Miriam..

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  4. Reena Saxena says:

    Lovely lyrical quality!

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you Reena

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  5. Wonderful and profound poem, Mich ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kamal..πŸ’•

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      1. Welcome dear Mich πŸ’—πŸ€—

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  6. A beautiful photo and poem duet, SweetMich. ❀️
    Such ponderful important questions…such good echoing “refrain”s …and a heart-breaking, but truthful conclusion.
    (((HUGS))) ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn.πŸ’•

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  7. A heart felt poem to which I certainly felt its beat dear Mich.. ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you so much Sue..πŸ’•

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  8. murisopsis says:

    So sad a tale. Do we ever really know the heart of another?

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Val..πŸ’•πŸ’”

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  9. This reads like a sad song, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you so much Punam..

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      1. You are welcome, Mich.

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  10. Simone E says:

    Wow, this is so profound and beautifully written! A great read 😊

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you❀😊

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  11. Beautiful imagery Dear Mich!
    πŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Cindy..

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      1. Always Mich! πŸ’•

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  12. Jeff Flesch says:

    Deep, powerful, and visceral. Gorgeous write, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Jeff..β€πŸ™

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        You’re most welcome, Mich. Always. β€οΈπŸ™

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  13. judeitakali says:

    I feel the pain and the depth. Gorgeous writing, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Jude β€πŸ™

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