Burnt

Burnt

your eyes
are like the sun burning fiercely
ablaze with excitement
whenever you see me smile
whenever you are beside me
and just like what they all say
your love is burning
and i am so burnt up
over you.

so let go of everything
abandon yourself to my love
love me
enjoy me
follow me
lean on me.

together
we will watch as
the skies set on fire.

24 Comments

  1. Wow, Mich! Ablaze with passion.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much PunamπŸ’•πŸ’•

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      1. You are welcome. ❀️

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  2. Sadje says:

    Such a passion filled poem. Awesome

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje❀

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  3. ivor20 says:

    Love thrives under the sunshine, there above within the celestial skyline πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’œπŸŒ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, such a pretty verse Ivor.. thank you

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      1. ivor20 says:

        My pleasure Mich ..

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  4. Such intense emotions of love. Well written, Mich

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so dearly Mariaβ€πŸ’•

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  5. murisopsis says:

    Passion’s blaze – a dangerous thing to play with fire! Love this one – it is hot!

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    1. michnavs says:

      πŸ’•πŸ’•thank you dearly Val❀

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  6. Eugenia says:

    Oh, such passion and fervor! I can feel it. Love this, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Eugi ..πŸ’•πŸ™

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      1. Eugenia says:

        My pleasure, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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      1. mrswrangler says:

        You’re welcome.

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  7. LOVE THE FIRE IN your belly of romance Mich! πŸ’–πŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much CindyπŸ’•

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      1. You’re always welcome Mich!! πŸ’–πŸ’–

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  8. An exquisite description of the ideal romance, Mich. Nothing half-hearted here! ❀ ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you so much Cheryl…β€πŸ™

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