Groovy Kind of Love

Groovy Kind of Love

’twas a groovy kind of love
what you had with your first love
i would never forget when you said
under the moonlight starry night
he declared his love, so raw
so pure so true so real
what happened after was surreal
you were left struggling in the dark
unsure of what the future would be
what used to be a love so true
was broken, was destroyed
so easily, so hastily
that groovy kind of love
turned out to be a modern twist
of the classic “Romeo and Juliet” tale.

19 Comments

    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, indeee Maria๐Ÿ’”

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  1. Sadje says:

    I like this groovy poem Mich ๐Ÿ’•

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay thank you Sadje..๐Ÿ’•โค

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      1. Sadje says:

        Youโ€™re welcome โ˜บ๏ธ

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  2. I really enjoyed the sound of this poem Michelle the groovy kind of love sure had its end!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..i am happy you love how it sounded..that was actually what i was trying to achieve – to sound good๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. murisopsis says:

    Mich I’m so glad I wrote my poem before reading yours – or I would have thrown in the towel and given up! You write about all the aspects and variations of love so well… This poem is so sad and so very real!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohh๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ you made me smile Val…thank you so much…i am so grateful and humbled by your comment…

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  4. Beautiful and groovy poem, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kamal๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. You are always welcome dear Mich.

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  5. this last stanza Mich?
    ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–
    “that groovy kind of love
    turned out to be a modern twist
    of the classic โ€œRomeo and Julietโ€ tale.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Cindy๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™

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      1. Always Mich! ๐Ÿ’–

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  6. Mich ~ the groovy kind ain’t all it’s cracked up to be!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Oh, yeah..thank you David…

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  7. How sad when that happens! ๐Ÿ’”

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    1. michnavs says:

      I know…thank you Punam๐Ÿ’”

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