On A Monday

On A Monday

my hand reaches out for yours
my hand longs for yours.

my mind screams of your brilliance
my mind yearns for you from a distance.

my heart desires your endearment
my heart craves for you at this moment.

my soul demands your assurance
my soul needs your love.

so

my hand reaches out for yours
while sadly, you’re reaching out
someone else’s hand.

and

at this moment, i hide and cry in pain
this moment, the same time
you used to say you love me

on a Monday, early dinner.

35 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Such as heartfelt poem Mich. Thanks for joining in and being the first one.

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you too Sadje…

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      1. Sadje says:

        It’s always my pleasure

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    2. I guess that’s why Monday’s blue.

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      1. michnavs says:

        Oh, yeah Monday blues indeee..thank youπŸ˜”

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      2. Sadje says:

        πŸ‘πŸΌ

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    1. michnavs says:

      thank you Sadje

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  2. A poem that moves the heart. Powerful.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much πŸ’•

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  3. Maria says:

    Beautiful ( β•Ήβ–½β•Ή )

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you MariaπŸ’•

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  4. Reena Saxena says:

    What follows on Tuesday? πŸ™‚

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    1. michnavs says:

      Hmmm …now that, you just gave me an idea ReenaπŸ’•πŸ€­thank you

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      1. Reena Saxena says:

        πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

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  5. murisopsis says:

    Gah! Unrequited love or love lost – either way it is gut wrenching! You certainly have the skill to drag those emotions out of me through my eyes….

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aww…. i am so sorry…πŸ˜”πŸ’• but i am so happy everytime you say that..πŸ™πŸ’•

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  6. Aw, this one is powerful and poignant. So sad. 😦
    But, when we love with hand, heart, mind, soul…we love fully and unconditionally. And then whether the person stays or goes, we know we did our best. πŸ™‚
    (((HUGS))) ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      That’s right Carolyn..what matters most is we indeed did our best .πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

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  7. Highly relatable, and beautifully written ❀

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much..

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  8. gjef2871 says:

    I’m sorry for your pain.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Don’t be…πŸ’•πŸ˜Š its fiction…thank you

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  9. Wow, this is a great one. I especially like the inclusion of those details at the end.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, thank you so much…i love to include details in my poems..and i am happy you like it.

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  10. Indira says:

    Such a touching poem.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you

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  11. Lakshmi Bhat says:

    Oh the pain. Well written.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so muchπŸ™β€

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  12. love the visual you created to match the pic Mich!
    πŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much CindyπŸ€—πŸ™πŸ’•

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  13. Sad when this happens! Nicely done, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you PunamπŸ’•β€

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      1. My pleasure. ❀️

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