That Night (A Flash Fiction)

That Night (A Flash Fiction)

“If only I was spared of your madness that night, I would have breathed life to a beautiful baby.”

I remember it so well; the darkness of the night, the sound of the cricket, the soft breeze blowing, and my heart beating fast. My mind went crazy, holding on to what could be the most precious thing I would ever have.

But, I was not spared. I was not spared from your unfounded accusations, tantrums, or unsolicited advice. I carefully read your messages between my shaking hands and my trembling knees. I felt the pain growing strongly. I felt the bleeding oozing fastly.

I cried. I cried the hardest. With the last message, you sent comes the last blood down my body.

I knew then it was the end.

I was not spared, so as my sweet little angel.

I lost her.

August 12.

I would welcome a new life, but I was not spared, and so was my angel.

For Eugi’s Weekly Prompt

16 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Mich this is absolutely heartbreaking.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww …thank you so much Sadje..πŸ’•πŸ™

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re always welcome my friend

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  2. kittysverses says:

    This is so sad, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much KittyπŸ™πŸ’•

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    1. michnavs says:

      aw, thank you Saania..

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  3. (((HUGS)))
    β€οΈπŸ™ ❀️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank youπŸ’•πŸ’•

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  4. well done Mich..,. you conveyed sadness so well!
    πŸ’–

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Cindyβ€πŸ™

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      1. πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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  5. Jeff Flesch says:

    Oh my goodness, your words are so painful, and absolutely beautiful. πŸ™β€οΈ

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Jeff for saying thatβ€πŸ™

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        You’re most welcome, Mich. Always. πŸ™β€οΈ

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