Hear Me

Hear Me

hear me i say i call out i pump
give way to the free spirited me
i cry, i yell, i laugh, i am full
life is what i am breathing of
no matter how it is i despise alcohol
but dear i’d binge on coffee caffeine
and i take pride i am full of courage.

• Write a ‘Golden Shovel’ poem, using a line (or more) from David’s poem. My line is “Pump me full of alcohol, caffeine, courage”

👉in case you missed it my poem “Wednesdays of Longing” is nominated as Spillwords Publication of the month. i would be greatly honored if you could click this link and vote:

29 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Ah! A good take Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje🙏💕

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  2. Jeff Flesch says:

    Wonderful, and a huge congratulations to you on your nomination, Mich! Amazing. 💞🙏

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Jeff💕🙏

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much🙏💕

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  3. Splendid poem Mich. Congratulations dear 💓

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kamal💕

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      1. Welcome dear Mich ❤️

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  4. Love this poem! So relatable, too.
    (((HUGS))) ❤️ 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn💕💕

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  5. memadtwo says:

    “life is what i am breathing of”–excellent line. (K)

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much💕

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  6. murisopsis says:

    Well done! I’m pumped but lack caffeine!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awee ….i am smiling Val💕🤗

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  7. Mich ❤ ~ it's so true ~ you are full of courage!

    Much love,
    David

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you David..I was late but surely will never miss your prompt.

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      1. I wasn’t going to say anything about that 😉

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  8. Nicely done Mich! 💖

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    1. michnavs says:

      oh thank you Cindy

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  9. Lovely poem! Congratulations on your nomination; I created a Spillwords account so that I could vote for you 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, thank you so dearly…i am truly humbled ..thank you💕🙏

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      1. You’re welcome!

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  10. Wonderful write, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Punam💕💕💕

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  11. Hi, Mich ❤

    I just want to let you know that this week's W3 is now live, and it'll be open until Sunday morning, 10:00 AM (GMT+3).

    I hope you can join us this week 🙂

    ~David

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    1. michnavs says:

      Heading over David😊

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