Forbidden

Forbidden

i trusted you had the best life
i trust you made the best choices
but what happened, dear
what have you done?

i trusted you had the best life
i trust you chose the right path
but looking at you, dear
made me question myself.

was it wrong to give up on you?
was it wrong to let you go?
was it wrong to believe you’ll be fine without me?
was it i who made you that way?

i trusted you had the best life
i trust you took the best road
but why oh why, my dear
did you waisted the best of you?

forbidden, that’s what you
are, so i did what must be correct
or just maybe what i thought so
for, damn! look at you.

23 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    A poem full of regrets Mich. beautifully written my friend

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so so much Sadje..❤️

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  2. Regrets in love and nicely written Mich ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Kamal❤️

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  3. Eugenia says:

    Some relationships just aren’t meant to be. Beautifully written poem, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Indeed Eugi…thank you so much.💕

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      1. Eugenia says:

        Most welcome, Mich! 💖

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  4. Susi Bocks says:

    Oh, Mich, nailed it! Do me a favor, email me at iwriteherblog@gmail.com, I wanted to share the review I sent to Amazon. 🙂 Thx!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Susi…sending you one.

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      1. Susi Bocks says:

        🙂 You’re welcome!

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  5. murisopsis says:

    Mich this one is exactly the inner dialogue of too many women who walk away from a train wreck of a relationship. Second guessing their choice and wondering who was at fault is self destructive. Love the way the woman decides that her choice was the right one!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Val….i love writing something like this lately…going inside the heart and mind of someone else’s experiencing something..i am so glad this one turned out pretty well as i wanted it to be..thank you Val.

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  6. The speaker may have some regrets but as an outsider looking in, I think she/he dodged a bullet

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww….you are right Maria…thank you 💕🙏

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  7. Beautifully written heartfelt piece

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much💕

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  8. This is so powerful, Mich! ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Collen💕

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