Can You Hear It?
can you hear the pitter-patter sounds
the rapid beats and taps of the ceiling
the mysterious progression as it expounds
into echoes of gunshots swiftly firing?
can you feel as it rumbles the ground
the fleet-footed batter pounding blow
the reverberating blast of noise around
underneath the clamor of the meadow?
can you see how strong and powerful it is
the never-ending sobbing and throbbing
the murmurs and mumbles that never cease
carefully, gently, slowly, and gradually hiding?
no. really? you don't hear a thing, my dear?
oh, maybe it's just my heart wishing you were here.
for David's Weekly Prompt,
I used prompt no.2 Option #2: Write a Shakespearean Sonnet using iambic pentameter (mine is with some modifications.)
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/10/12/w3-prompt-24-weave-written-weekly
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Michelle Ayon Navajas (born June 23, 1976) is a Filipino poet, writer, and educator. She is a Best-Selling international Poet known for her books reaching the #1 spot within days of their release. Her 8th poetry book, “I Am In Itself Poetry In The Dark,” went straight to the top of both the best-sellers list and new releases on Amazon on short notice. Her 7th poetry book, “It Ain’t Winning If Without You,” went straight to the best-sellers list on Amazon in less than 24 hours of release by pre-orders alone and eventually became the number Poetry Book on Amazon India on its actual release day, soon after the book rose to the best- sellers list as well in all other Amazon Markets worldwide.
Currently, Michelle holds the title of having 4 books published in a row to have made it to Amazon’s Best-Sellers List ("I Will Love You Forever, Too,” “After Rain Skies, 2nd Edition,” “It Ain’t Winning If Without You,” and “I Am In Itself Poetry In The Dark”) and 3 books on Amazon’s #1Hot New Releases/New Releases ("I Will Love You Forever, Too,” “It Ain’t Winning If Without You,” and “I Am In Itself Poetry In The Dark”.)
Her poetry appeared in several international literary magazines and anthologies such as Spillwords NYC, MasticadoresUsa, and MasticadoresIndia. Her poems “Holding Hands” was voted as Spillwords Publication of the Month for November 2021 and “Love Happens” was voted as Spillwords Publication of the Month for December 2022.
She is also part of the award-winning ensemble of authors in two Poetry Anthologies, that are both Amazon Best-Sellers: Hidden In Childhood and Wounds I Healed.
Graduated with a Master of Education majoring in English in the Philippines (University of San Agustin, Iloilo City). Michelle was a former college professor, teaching literature, speech & oral communication, creative writing, drama, and theatre arts. She is also a graduate of Mass Communications major in Journalism (Centro Escolar University, Manila).
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Beautifully ended my friend
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Thank you so much Sadje..
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You’re most welcome
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Really like the twist at the end! Enjoyed all the sounds in this poem 🙂
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Yay, i am so glad you enjoyed this…💕thank you
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Mich I was wondering and then the ending and POW! it all became clear! Loved this one!!
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Yay,…i am so glad you love this one Val..💕💕💕
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Beautiful and sweet ending! 🙂
(((HUGS))) ❤️
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Thank you so much Carolyn…
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❤️🌷
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Thank you💕
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Sweet ending! I enjoyed all the auditory imagery, too!
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Thank you so much..💕💕
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A beautiful sonnet.
(I can hear rain and thunder in it)
Thank you 🙏 🪶🌹
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Aww thank you so much..
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longing becomes you here and is so lovely for the prompt Mich❣️
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Thank you dearly Cindy😊
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Indeed my friend❣️
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Hi, Mich ❤
I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by the lovely Sunra Rainz, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2022/10/19/w3-prompt-25-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy 🙂
~David
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Heading over David
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❤ ❤ ❤
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