I Relinquish

I Relinquish

my years of restless nights
the pain i hide inside
the smile i keep
to camouflage
with the scars, i nurture
i relinquish
to the universe to
carry the burden
so heavy.
every single spark of hope
i carry around
that keeps me goin’,
i relinquish
to the moon and back
and let the sunshine
take away all my pain
let the moonlight
cast upon all my sorrows.
i relinquish
i surrender
i’m done.
and so maybe, just maybe
if you give me a call
i sure would surrender
to love’s final call
for i would not want anything
but you.
i surrender.

for Sadje’s WDYS

25 Comments

  1. I love your take, Mich. Masterfully crafted

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so dearly Maria..

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂

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  2. Beautiful! In all sadness, it shows self-determination! Have a nice week! xx Michael

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…😊

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  3. Sadje says:

    This is so beautiful Mich. why carry that heavy burden and why not hand it over to something much bigger than us. Thanks for joining in my friend.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje…for this beautiful prompt.

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      1. Sadje says:

        My pleasure dear friend

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje..

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  4. murisopsis says:

    Oh my heart! This is magnificent!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhhhhh….💕💕 thank you so much Val….

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  5. Gorgeous picture with your words of surrender Mich❣️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay, thank you Cindy😊

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      1. You’re so welcome Mich! ❣️

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  6. Your poem brings tears to my eyes! It is so heart-touching and so beautiful!
    All of us need help carrying our pain, emotions and burdens…from nature and from other people.
    And it’s so lovely that we can help each other. ❤️
    I take Coop on late night or early morning walks and I love communing with the moon, stars, clouds. 🙂
    (((HUGS))) 🙂 ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn.
      I am sure Coop is such a delightful companion

      😊😊😊

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  7. Beautifully written ❤

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  8. judeitakali says:

    Oh to be a slave to love!
    Beautiful poetry.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Jude😊😊

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      1. judeitakali says:

        🖐🏽🤩

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