Can You?

Can You?

can you see my scars
the scars i endured for years
can you heal them?

can you feel my broken limbs
the brokenness i lived through
can you mend them?

can you hear my pain
the affliction i experienced
can you make them go away?

For Sadje’s WDYS

33 Comments

  1. no, but we can listen and hear ❤

    ~David

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww….thank you David❤️🌹🤗

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  2. Destiny says:

    Touching and deep Mich. 🤍 Beautifully penned…

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Destiny🌹

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  3. ivor20 says:

    I am Richard the lizard

    A wise and withered wizard

    Who stealthily slithered and delivered

    His magic beyond heartaches and blizzards

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you for this lovely verse Ivor🌹

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      1. ivor20 says:

        Your lovely words do inspire me Mich … actually I have just expanded the words into a meaningful metaphorical poem (slightly satirical) … I like my piece .. so right now I am submitting it to “Spillwords” …

        “Schoolyards and Lizards”

        Enter Richard the lizard
        A wise and withered wizard
        Who stealthily slithered and delivered
        His magic beyond pandemics and blizzards

        Recreating a safe haven
        An unsmeared and inured schoolyard
        To be shared by the children
        Without the National Guard

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      2. michnavs says:

        Oh wow i am so glad this piece sparked another brillian Spillwords poems Ivor…well done🌹🌹

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      3. ivor20 says:

        We’ll wait and see, but I think the poem’s message worked ok …

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  4. Reena Saxena says:

    The pain is so palpable.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Reena🌹🤗

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  5. Having a friend or someone you can talk to is very important in times like these. Well done, Mich

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    1. michnavs says:

      That is so true Maria…thank you so much🤗🌹

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  6. Very emotional, well done.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Mason🌹

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  7. Sadje says:

    A beautiful, poignant poem Mich. Thanks for joining in.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Sadje🌹

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      1. Sadje says:

        Always my pleasure

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  8. We would if we could. But, we can definitely relate, care, listen, pray, and give (((HUGS))).
    Powerful poem, SweetMich!
    ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn🌹🤗🙏

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  9. Who knows? We can but hope.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Keith🌹

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  10. lesleyscoble says:

    Reminds me of the film about Michelangelo—The Agony and the Ecstasy 💙 beautiful 🌹

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Lesley..🌹❤️

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  11. Audrine Max says:

    tough yet sincere questions to ask. that was exquisite, Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much …i am so glad you like it..🌹❤️

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      1. Audrine Max says:

        always a pleasure 😊❤️

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  12. Indira says:

    Beautiful. So emotional.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Indira❤️

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      1. Indira says:

        My pleasure, dear.

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