Jungle -Tanka

a concrete jungle
i am as i keep the night
alive like daylight
i breathe the midnight dew drop
exhaled dreams of forever.

For David’s Prompt

• Form: Tanka (5-7-5-7-7 syllables);

• Must include:

• The phrase “Concrete jungle”

• The poetic device of personification

• Goal: To bring attention to the beauty and complexities of urban landscapes through the traditional Japanese poetic form of the tanka.

24 Comments

  1. kittysverses says:

    Beautiful personification, Mich. 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kitty🌹

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  2. … as i keep the night
    alive…

    Yes❣️ I love this ❤

    ~David

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you David🌹

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  3. Sadje says:

    This is a lovely poem Mich. spot on.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Sadje🌹❤️

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  4. PebbleGalaxy says:

    This was one of the best entries!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Ohhh…whoaaa .you just made my day..thank you🌹❤️

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  5. murisopsis says:

    Oh! This one is delightful!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Val❤️❤️

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  6. Personification perfection!
    Great images and feelings in your Tanka!
    (((HUGS))) 🙂 ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn🌹

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  7. i love the drumbeat of your tanks Mich powerful !

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    1. sorry – tanka – not tanks!!

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      1. michnavs says:

        😊😊😊

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    2. michnavs says:

      Thank you Gina❤️❤️

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  8. Hi, Mich ❤

    I just wanna let you know that this week's W3 prompt, hosted by the wonderful Angela Wilson, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/02/08/w3-prompt-41-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy!

    ~David

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    1. michnavs says:

      ❤️🌹thank you David

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      1. you’re so welcome, Mich ❤

        BTW, This week's W3 prompt, hosted by the amazing Tanmay Philip is now live:

        https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/02/15/w3-prompt-42-weave-written-weekly/

        Enjoy ❤

        ~David

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      2. michnavs says:

        Thanks David..❤️

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