Time

Time (A Flash Fiction)

it was 15 minutes past 6:00 in the evening. in that moment, i realized how beautiful the night sky was. it brought so much beauty like no other time of the day. the only sound was the wind whistling through trees along the busy street of the university belt, with the occasional honking of the car here and there. the city light became so melancholic that it was difficult not to ultimately be sad while looking at the night sky. and then, as i looked up, i saw a sight like no other a brightly shining full moon, a sea of ​​tiny stars surrounding it, and a sky all around, covered with blackness, speckled with beauty.

but this beauty does not come without a cost. yes, the night offers the magical sights of a starry night sky. still, it also means that the day has ended. as much as i hate to admit it, i can’t let go of my sadness; i wish that time would stand still for a moment so that i can be with you for a while.

but i can’t stop the time. i can’t even make you stay.

it was 15 minutes past 6:00 in the evening. our time together is over.

“bye, see you tomorrow in class i need to pick up Cindy for now.”

i didn’t need to hear more of what you had to say, i turned my back and walked away.

28 Comments

  1. Sadje says:

    Time stand still for no one, but we occasionally get to experience it’s unique moments! Beautiful write Mich.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Sadje❤️🌹

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      1. Sadje says:

        My pleasure dear Mich

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  2. Reena Saxena says:

    What a twist at the end! I like the concept of paying a price for the beauty of the night. Well-constructed piece!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Reena❤️

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  3. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Time …. by Michelle Ayon Navajas

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Reena

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  4. Max Ethan says:

    I like the concept of paying a price for the beauty of the night.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much ❤️🌹

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  5. kittysverses says:

    Nice write, Mich. 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kitty🌹❤️

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      1. kittysverses says:

        You are welcome, Mich. 🙂

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  6. Beauty and sadness

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    1. michnavs says:

      It is indeed Maria🌹❤️ thank you

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Indira❤️

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      1. Indira says:

        My pleasure, dear.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you❤️

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      1. Thanks for always sharing great poetry and thoughts. xx Michael

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  7. Aw. 😦 But, so beautiful and beautifully written.
    (((HUGS))) ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Carolyn❤️

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  8. touching story about longing and settling for stolen moments

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Gina🌹

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  9. Whoa, I love this one, Mich. Touches the soul with an irresistible tenderness at first, and then poignancy. What a beautiful way to talk about parting. Mmm… amazing, my friend. 💕

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Lamittan, 🌹❤️

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  10. Great write Mich with a twist for the heart.. love it! ❣️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yay,…thank you Cindy🌹❤️

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