I Am Your Silent Solitude

I Am Your Silent Solitude

i was with you when you first cried of a broken heart; you never understood why at seventeen, you bled.

you stained me with the tears of a lover who went away in haste, leaving you shattered and damaged.

i was with you when you first had a fight, with your sisters sending your mom at the peak of her fury.

you broke my limbs, ripped me in pieces, for what you call a pillow fight.

i was with you when you first learned the pain of being unwell was nothing but a death sentence.

you embraced me hard, so hard you had me choked, i almost died.

i was with you when you first heard the truth that DNA does not count as family.

you punched me and threw me over and over the wall as if it was my fault that you were not born from the family you learned to love your own.

i was with you when you first thought of dying when death, in fact, was not even the answer to your problems.

you spoke to me like i could change a thing or two, but even then, you knew i was with you all through your rough days and all through your smooth ones.

i was with you, and i will never leave you alone; no matter what life throws at you, i will be beside you even in the darkest of nights and the coldest of days.

i am your silent solitude waiting to give you a restful night.

Written for David’s Weekly Prompt:https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/03/08/w3-prompt-45-weave-written-weekly/

David ben Alexander’s prompt guidelines:

Write a poem from the perspective of an inanimate household object, using personification.

40 Comments

    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much❤️

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    2. Aditi says:

      Lovely poem. It made me feel so many emotions altogether.❣️

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      1. michnavs says:

        Thank you so much .i appreciate you stopping by🌹

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  1. SelmaMartin says:

    I love my pillowS and can’t sleep without them. This is lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you for reading Selma🌹❤️

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  2. poetisatinta says:

    Love this – made me realise how we take the humble pillow for granted ❤

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…indeed, AJ..our pillows play an important role in our lives.

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  3. A wonderfully woven poem. I love how it told a story.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Aw, thank you Tanmay🌹

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  4. That pillow is a constant comfort. This is a strong piece, lots of emotion.

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much…🌹🌹🌹

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Paula🌹

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  5. Another wonderful piece Mich!!!!💞

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Cindy❤️

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  6. lesleyscoble says:

    The pillow talks ❤️

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    1. michnavs says:

      Yes..indeed 😊 thank you Lesley

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  7. calmkate says:

    loads of emotion packed into this one Mich 🙂

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Kate❤️

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  8. Ooh! This is brimming with emotions, Mich!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Awww… thank you Punam🌹🌹🌹

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      1. You are welcome. 🌷

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you Maria🌹

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  9. Mich,

    I’m selecting you to be this week’s PoW for W3! MAZAL TOV!

    I just emailed you at mi…as@gmail.com ~ could you please check to see if you received it (sometimes my emails go into spam). If you haven’t received it, please email me at

    DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM

    Thanks ❤
    David

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much David…yay, i am truly honored to be chosen this week’s Poet of the Week. I sent you my prompt..

      Thank you

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  10. Sadje says:

    Such a moving tribute to your pillow!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Sadje🌹

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  11. murisopsis says:

    Such a rollercoaster ride of emotion! Wow!!

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    1. michnavs says:

      Thank you so much Val😍

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